Reviews for Maximum Ride The Ultimate Ride
BLAYNK chapter 3 . 3/14/2009
Update soon please!

LIVIA
Dark EleGoddess chapter 2 . 3/10/2009
hey i want to know what happens next so please write and b.t.y your story's are kind of detailed
BLAYNK chapter 2 . 3/8/2009
I really like it. you better update or write more or whatever 'cause this is a really good story so far!

LIVIA
Fallen Ark Angel chapter 2 . 3/8/2009
What was it? max isn't mad about Fnag not listening to her and making them do it is she?
SerynKalla chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Good idea for a story. I liked it, but I really do think that you should revise it. Apart from some grammatical and mechanics errors, there were also some spelling mistakes, and some trite similies and metaphors.

Now, don't get me wrong. I'm not trying to rip on you, I'm just saying that this is a great idea for a story, it just needs a little work and revision.

If you'd like, I'd be more than happy to help.

Keep writing! I love the lemoney goodness!
NoZombieIsSafeFromChicagoTed chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
i reckon u should continue, after that, u can open up to a whole load of stuff

like the flock finding out.

(angel walks in all like "so max i- ZOMGWTFHAXBBQ! BBQ I SAY! and fang is like ZOMG WALLH4X!)
Jilly Kay chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
huh...very unfanglike
Fallen Ark Angel chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
are you goona write more? cause that was freaking awesome!
Mistress of Words39 chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
I really liked it.

Was this a one-shot? Or are you going to continue?

Either way I loved it!
MaximumRideForever chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
wow so kewl
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