Reviews for Time To Wake Up
HN chapter 6 . 4/26/2010
This was just an awesome story. I never expect much when I visit the Pit of Voles, but this is absolutely a gem. I was surprised, and pleased, to find something well-plotted, smutty, emotionally intense, and skillfully written.

Job well done.
muumuu122 chapter 6 . 9/29/2009
As usual I don't have anything clever to say but yay, I loved this :D
doomshuriken chapter 6 . 9/22/2009
aww, they're so cute when they're in their afterglow... :)

I loved the whole Roxas!Sora business, especially with Axel, and lol to the Riku affair... :) Still can't believe this was your first tutti fruity fic... :) Good thing citrus is my favorite type of fruit... :D Anyway, no, they aren't awkward, they super-sexy, in their cute, chibi!Sora way.

btw, a drunken pirate Roxas? LOL
Pantharya chapter 6 . 7/21/2009
Ahh _ The ending was more perfect than i thought it was going to be.

The scene with Axel and Roxas was just cute as heck. I couldn't stop smiling the whole time. Very insanely awesome _

The "(they were, after all, somewhat evil)" note made me laugh, and so did Sora talking to himself on the boat.

Of course, I was fully absorbed by the story and the scene with Sora talking to Riku on the beach hit a little too close to home, making me cry a little, but still! _ Wow. A most brilliant way to end such a good story. Of course, that sex scene was the best one in the whole fic too x3 Incredibly romantic the whole way through. Man. It was so brilliant.

In case I haven't mentioned it, This chapter was awesome _ Truly truly awesome. Thank you for writing something so freaking cool!
Pantharya chapter 5 . 7/21/2009
Ahh _ How excellent! Everything is wrapping up nicely.

Apparently you do conclusions very well too 3

And I dunno x3 I don't think there was enough sex for it to be called "Everyone Has Sex With Everyone Else". I mean there was only what .. 3 sex scenes? and only one of them was actually described. _ The story was compelling though.

*runs to see what happens with Riku*
Pantharya chapter 4 . 7/21/2009
Okay Okay, This Chapter was AWESOME!

First off with Kairi wildly attacking Axel. That was /epic/. It was just damn cool _ As well as Axel's little muttering that made me laugh.

There was that little account of Riku loving Sora so strongly and unconditionally at one point ... that was incredibly incredibly sweet. I liked it very much.

Followed of course by Roxas' "You’re an asshat. I’m putting you to sleep now" _ That made me laugh too.

Vexen was a Big surprise, and a very pleasant one at that. Vexen! Yuss! _ You need kudos for fully explaining and fleshing out the entire plot with the nobodies not dying and being able to come back, as well as what Roxas was needed for and being able to be put in another body. It was convincing and solid, and I liked it very much.

And the bit where Sora is all sad ... that was just heartwrenching. Especially when he was talking to Roxas. You wrote it all so well. The emotions of it all are touching and addicting x3
Pantharya chapter 3 . 7/21/2009
Now that was something!

It was going very well, though I do think the sex-in-the-middle-of-the-street was a little out of the blue, though it makes sense in context. Kinda strange that Riku left all of a sudden straight after too. I think it just seemed a bit funny that with a scene like that they suddenly start going at it like rabbits x3 But hey, it worked.

The bit with "Aros" was funny _ Especially when Roxas started picking up the Puns in their names.

And "Sora’s whisper was quiet, but laden with enough anger to kill a bull elephant " was the most epic quote in the story so far _
Pantharya chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
Woo! It's getting better! _

The plot is really shaping up, and you really manage to set scenes effectively. You always manage to use dialogue in a way that I can actually imagine teh real voice actors saying it, as well as the characters doing what they should do. It's quite excellent 3

And the Roxas flashback was awesome. Not only humourous, but with a heated fight and some very convincing emotions.

The Roxas/Riku thing is really really interesting, even if it hasn't happened in the story yet x3 This is so cool.
Pantharya chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
I've only read the first chapter so far, and I was really enjoying it to _

... Right up to the bit where Sora and Kairi start getting it on. Then I was all kinds of angry with Sora P And Kairi. I mean really, poor Riku. The romantic stuff with him was going so well...

But I must say it was written very well. The sex scene was described with detail to the extent that I almost felt I was there, only I wasn't , for if I was I would've been kicking Sora. x3 What a bad kid.
tk-chan13 chapter 2 . 7/4/2009
Yay~ My head hurts from reading this! (Prob'ly just cause I'm tired and my schedule requires at least 12 hours of sleep per day...) So far it's good, but I just kinda scanned over the SoraKairi lemon (can't STAND hentai of any sort...) so I probably messed up my reading pace, resulting in said headache. I shall continue reading tomorrow, and (again) you are a genious.
shushan chapter 6 . 5/26/2009
lol...pornastic indeed ;)

though even though it was like porntopia, it was oddly sweet at the end...

keep on writing :)

i really love the part when sora is sleeping on roxas and they talk...


having sex with my other is a little too kinky ;)

maybe you should do a oneshot about that! lol lol xD



btw, what happened to kairi? lol
RunningWest chapter 6 . 5/7/2009
Whoa. The shmex.

I really liked this fic... Even if there was hetero shmex with Kairi xD Though she really didn't bug me in this fic.

I loved all the Roxas flashbacks and the reactions that followed xD the one after Riku and Roxas had sex was so funny haha I lawled... and then Sora started beating the shit out of Riku and I was like "Whoa, calm down, Sora O_O;"

The ending was cute... I'm sure Sora would have come quietly though if Axel had just explained himself though, you know? xD

Anyways, awesome job on the fic. :)

-Axel's Roxas
fabulosfan chapter 6 . 4/9/2009
Wow! Only 6 reviews! Your writing is about as good as another author I know that writes for Naruto instead of KH, and she gets almost 100 reviews per chapter. Your writing is great. I love the last part with sora and riku. Shapeless blob? Intresting. Great story in all. Now I'm off to see other stories!
Balandria chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Wow...I am REALLY impressed. If, at the end, you hadn't mentioned that this is your first finished KH fic, I never would have known. All of the characters seemed easily established and real. The humor pulled me all the way through along with an actually good plot. It wasn't crazy or totally out there. It just made sense.

And it figures that after something as dramatic as going into a new body and being together after a long time, Roxas and Axel would first say that they want to go to the beach or something.

But, still, it was really good. And I agree. If it would have been titled Everyone Has Sex With Everyone Else, that would have been awesome though I don't think that the people running this would think too kindly on that suggestion.
Optomistic Emo Kleptomaniac chapter 6 . 4/3/2009


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