|Reviews for Vampire Laps|
| Mordanyes chapter 2 . 11/27/2009
Great story! I loved it! Great job! Well done with the editing too! I subscribe to complete stories in case the authors write anything else like sequels and stuff so yeah...
| Emfish01 chapter 2 . 8/13/2009
Haha! This was a really interesting story. The old man was funny. :) I like the word "ruddy" too. I'm partially British though. Oh well! You're a good writer! Awesome story!
| Kris Cullenz chapter 2 . 6/10/2009
okay i srsly thought the old man was that guy at the begining of "harry potter goblet of fire"
becuase he was all like "ruddy teenagers"
love it! please right more to the story! maybein Edwards POV?
| sweetlovegone chapter 2 . 6/10/2009
This was so funny i lved reading this !
And i know what you mean about the ruddy lol!
great story !
| sweetlovegone chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
hi, i love this story, i enjoyed every minute of it! I'm gonna read your other stories now your really good!
Oh and if you wouldn't mind, could you please read mine? i just really want to know what people think, so if you do please review.
Thankz, love this!
| katpetrova chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
AWESOME ;) Love it
| Grovz2014 chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
ha that was a very good story hey you should write more chapters
| LuckyPatronusCharm chapter 2 . 5/4/2009
This is really good! Maybe one of the cullens- maybe Alice since she could see the future- would see this happen and then it you could do that character's POV. You did the Old man's POV really well- It's funny!
| The fault in my heart chapter 2 . 4/17/2009
Very funny loved it maybe a little degrading to elderly people but liked it anyway
Oh just wanted to tell you my story is out although it isn't the one i was telling you about it is a different one that just came to me but gr8 story anyway
PS U r American so u may not like my story cause im Australian
So G'day Mate ( We don't really say that)
And crikey what a good story
| ClubEmmett chapter 2 . 4/12/2009
heaps good contine writing please
| trixily chapter 2 . 4/11/2009
that was so funny xD
by the way i love the word "ruddy" too. and i'm estonian. so yeah. **P
| karu0792 chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
I didn't really read this until just now but it's really awesome halirous fluff-ness! LOL!
| XOXOILLLOVEHIMEFOREVER chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Cool beans it was great
| TimeWasterGirl chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
I really liked your writting style!
it's a great One shot!
| tsagafan4life chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
That was really funny. I think it would have been funnier if the man would have walked out of the bathrooms when bella was reaching for edwards hand.