Reviews for The Only One Who Can
AspergianStoryteller chapter 13 . 11/23/2009
Oo- if you haven't already decided on a possible cause for Devil Fruit powers, asides from random mutations- what about them being a side effect from mixing human and S.I blood. Like how in Dragon Ball Z, human and Saiyan blood are a powerful mix. After all, Luffy does have some interesting reletives. And about the Shichibukai, are they S.I who have agreements with the humans, like pirates working with the goverment in cannon?
Darth Luffy chapter 13 . 11/1/2009
pretty good, i like the way you did Zoro's fight very cool, and it's reveals a little more info about SI's

Nami risking herself to help Luffy was cool too, bit ironic that he got his worst injury due to her assisstance though
Darth Luffy chapter 12 . 8/23/2009
pretty good, nami going to rob the bandits was predictable but mainly cause that's just how nami is

Kuro having shown up at the end is interesting as in the manga i don't think him and zoro ever got to really fight and they would seem to be a fairly even match

also Luffy being hypnotized into sleeping was a nice touch, now usopp either has to fight on his own or find a way to wake luffy, personally i'd like to see usopp fight what's left of the bandits on his own then wake luffy to help out with Kuro
Sora Tayuya chapter 6 . 8/22/2009
Nice. He totally just landed on top of Nami. I can tell.
Sora Tayuya chapter 5 . 8/22/2009
Yes! I totally knew that you would make Zoro be a S.I.! I was kinda hoping that Morgan would be one, but that would make too many too early. I am so glad that I read the title carefully, it is so obvious that Zoro is a S.I. if you think carefully about the title and description. Wakata, it is all good.
Sora Tayuya chapter 2 . 8/17/2009
wow this is too good. Interesting stuff, I like it.
Darth Luffy chapter 11 . 8/5/2009
pretty good chapter to set up the fights to come, i'm interested as to how this fight will play out as either Luffy or Zoro can easily wipe out the entire enemy crew and i dont think either of them would have much problem with Kuro

oh and at the end i noticed where you said that Kuro had a high speed Ba Gua, if it's not destroyed while fighting you should have the crew take it wiht them, even with a larger ship to travel in a high speed model would be useful, much like the waver is in the manga
avatoa chapter 11 . 8/4/2009
Thanks for the new chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
AspergianStoryteller chapter 10 . 7/27/2009
Oo, a cliffie, curse you. :) Hey, what will you do the rest of the Straw Hats? Will anymore of them be S.I? What about Chopper and Brooke, huh? And the Shichibukai? Will they be like, super powerful protectors, or S.I who worked with the govt?
Darth Luffy chapter 10 . 7/20/2009
pretty good, i like how your changing the way the Kuro Arc happenend

the fight with the S.I. was pretty cool and you could actually use Nami's apparant helplessness agaisnt an S.I. as a reason for her to become stronger like the Alabasta Arc did for her in the manga and as Luffy and Zoro seems to be stronger than they were at the same time in the manga it'd make sense for the rest of the crew to be close to the same level as them

also the bit about Zoro questioning the Marines killing S.I. was nice as it make Luffy wonder about the marines real motives
avatoa chapter 10 . 7/20/2009
Thanks for finally updating this great story. I like all the little twists you put in this chapter regarding the beginning of the Kuro arc. Hope to see more ASAP.
JamieGlasgow4 chapter 6 . 7/6/2009
I swear I laughed for five minutes straight when I saw the korean sentence. Bet you get a laugh out of writing that huhㅋㅋ
JamieGlasgow4 chapter 3 . 7/6/2009
So Luffy finally met Zoro huh? By the way, I love your sense of humor.. ㅋ크리프핸거ㅋ? Don't exactly know what 크리프핸거 means but ㅋhad me laughing for a few minutes there.

...what does it mean anyway?

Oh yeah, I know this isn't the right review panel for it but I love your idea of Zoro being an Imoogi. Please hurry up I can't wait to see what that would do when Zoro is with the Straw Hat Pirates.
Crysania Fay chapter 9 . 7/2/2009
I can't wait for the next chapter! I like how you are parralling the original series of events. And Luffy's the good guy now! YAY! I hope you update soon!
Darth Luffy chapter 9 . 6/12/2009
pretty good, i had completely forgot about the dog being there

wonder where they are headed next? and since you have made small changes to each of the characters so far i'm wondering how the rest of the crew will be
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