Reviews for a chance encounter
pegasus5406 chapter 14 . 2/23/2012
Wow...that was exciting...loved the story hon and this chapter was awesome...thanks hon...huggs Peggy
Mrs. Giselle Cullen chapter 2 . 11/23/2010
Why did she get pissed because he laughed at her shirt?
Mrs. Giselle Cullen chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
Okay. So I am interested in the story line, and seeing where it goes. But, I have to say that the grammar is pretty bad, along with the punctuation. I am hoping you get a beta along the way here, as it is hard to follow along. BUT, again, the story line is interesting so I will continue to give it a shot )
DylanObrien-Hoechlin chapter 15 . 7/31/2010
like this!XXxx
randomcupcake123 chapter 15 . 2/6/2010
i loved your story (;
SimplyPixie chapter 4 . 1/3/2010
oopsies! awkward much! Love it
MrsMajorJ chapter 13 . 12/29/2009
oh, I love that, "That's my girlfriend you are hurting, let her go." I feel kinda tingly now.
MrsMajorJ chapter 12 . 12/29/2009
much better chapter, your beta is doing well. I can't wait tosee where she's going.
MrsMajorJ chapter 9 . 12/29/2009
Last review got chopped in half when computer shut down all by itself. While I love this story, this chapter was very hard to follow. the punctution, and sprelling was bad...see what I mean. Glad that your hubby is home safely, my has been home a year since his turn over there. For us, meaning me, the hardest part of deployment is that first few months where he is still in Major mode and so am I, cause when he's gone, I'm the Major in this house. :) Keep reading your chapters out loud, it helps with the sentence structure and spelling. Really it does, try it
MrsMajorJ chapter 7 . 12/29/2009
O Oh ho, was Alice busy with Jazzy? She caved to skipping class awfully easily.
RyainDrop chapter 15 . 10/21/2009
loved it
wendy1969 chapter 14 . 10/6/2009
a bit more of a story, in one shots or just sequel type story, u know like a part 2, where em and bells are out earning there way in the world, still in touch with there family from college, but an old family member of conners or a jealous ex of one of them in the mix. a baby boom for our star couple and maybe a big wedding after failing to elope to las vegas, hehehehe. anyways,I LOVED IT.
wendy1969 chapter 10 . 10/6/2009


or simply put, SHIELDED.
TwilightFanpire4ev chapter 2 . 8/27/2009

“Turn that bubble gum pop shit off."

Er. Next time please keep your opinion to yourself. BTW ! loving the story. Your an amazing author. ]
booknerd0426 chapter 12 . 8/22/2009
Um I hope shes not going to see who i think shes going to see is she?
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