|Reviews for EARTHQUAKE!|
| gaijingirl1 chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
So when I read the summary I was intrigued and curious enough to have a look... now I'm addicted! Really interesting and unique so far, I'm looking forward to more.
| Sheeijan chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
I just got caught up on this story, and wow this is unique and absolutely riveting! Seriously you have got some imagination on you. And just for the record, I don't expect you to know all that crap about flora and fauna, etc. - good grief you're not Jean M. Auel! I certainly hope no one starts nitpicking.
Anyway, sounds like this is going to be extremely action packed. The thing with the jaguar was interesting and I don't know if I should be reading as much into it as I possibly am. The first thing I thought of was that old movie, "Cat People" (I think that was the name). But hopefully I'm just letting my imagination get away with me!
| ms.readsalot1211 chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
Another chapter, already? Nice.
I love how you describe things. This is a fairly simple scene. Whomever is hanging off of the tree branch hasn't moved, yet various interactions happen - and everything is described well. And the descriptions aren't futile, or space fillers, they add to the scene. I really like that.
I get goosebumps imagining myself in the position of Edward or Bella, whomever the virgin sacrifice is, and having bugs crawl over my body or vampire bats lick the blood on my wrists. Ew!
I'm thinking the other one is there, at the end. I'm interested to find out who is who, but I really like that you have kept it a secret and have kept it so that we can't figure it out just yet.
Thanks for writing,
| ms.readsalot1211 chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
This was fantastically unique. I want to think that the kid kidnapped is Bella and the anthropologist is Edward, but it could easily be flipped around. Or this could easily be another couple.
Isle Esme, in my opinion, was so CHEESY in the book. I love that you are using it for something creative.
Thanks for writing,
| Pastiche Pen chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
Oh merciful heavens! You made em' stinky.
| Soccer11 chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
its bugging me that i cant tell who is who ugh haha
| Myblueside chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
intriguing...will there be more?
| Twilily chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
I'm intrigued by this story. I look forward to where it goes from here! Keep it up!
| Tiggrmommi chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
HOLY HELL that's incredibly creepy! Bats and eats, eww! OYE! Oh my goodness I can't wait to see what happens next! WOW! Again, another incredible story that has me on the edge of my seat! Thanks for sharing!
| Tiggrmommi chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Ok WOW! Seriously how do you come up with this? Interesting! And again like nothing I've read before! Off to read chapter two which I see you have already so graciously posted for us to enjoy!
| Kyrene once Blood Roses chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
...you have not made one reference to gender or names at all and it's making me nervous. This chapter made me cringe like whoa. I think that was the point. But gah! That wouldn't kill her? (Or whoever it is...hoping her...doesn't virgin sacrifices have to be a her? I don't know, the first chapter and one of the explanations made me nervous.) Happy to see you have another story. Going to need to check Twilighted to see where this one will be updated one more. Keep Going!
| halojones chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
HAHAHAHAHA on your disclaimer, my colonized mind is enraptured already! Isle Esme, Virgin Edward doing a Joe vs. the Volcano sacrifice, the word genitalia used in conjunction with erect...or freaking good golly, am I gonna have fun with this one! J-Fly...J-Fly...J-Fly!(Did anyone ever tell you your name brings instant images of circa 1991 during her Fly Girl days? )
| Soccer11 chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
who was the narrato bella or edward? this story sounds really interesting.
| Pastiche Pen chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
"Human virginal sacrifice. Poor kid."
Never a better end to a first chapter. Never ever.