Reviews for Cold Shower
kat chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Phew, that shower scene was great. I love dirty-talking Edward!
lemmonpie chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Looooooved it! amazing oneshot!
idancewithvamps chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
that. was. amazing.
grandsophia chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
really really love this !
jazzberry chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
totally f'ing hot enjoy it from begining to end :)
Itanaru101 chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
THAT WAS AMAZING!
schmexykittykat chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
That was absolutely AFUCKINGMAZING
Archullen chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
i liked it :)
Janer59 chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
that was adorable...i LOVED it...i cant believe this is your first story...cant wait for something else from you! :)
xXnightfallsbrightXx chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Very good!
kaypgirl chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Wow, those lyrics fit perfectly. Nice one-shot, although I would've liked a little more hints of Bella's feelings (although it might not have been possible).
Sabelina chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
Okay one: that was HOT! Two: your writing a little long in places - shorten up the pharagraphs.
twilightobession chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
OMG! You said "I will get more comfortable with these 2 eventually. This is my first try." If this was your 1st try, you are one HOT writer. With this being your 1st, I can't wait to see what else you come up with. I think it will be hard to top this one. But you go own and try. :):):) I am off to check out your profile and see what else you have written. I am putting you on Author alert! Go write some more lemons!
neonapple chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Wow - very hot for a one time deal! I'd love to see you write something longer.
cristiann romero chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
It was very...WET!...hehe!:]Thank you.
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