|Reviews for Cold Shower|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
This is really good! :)
| OneManShow chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Aw. That was adorable.
| roswellachick chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
What a great chapi. It really gave anice glimpse of post outsiders and t.w.t.t.I.n. The part where soda and darry were outside- precious.
| FanFicFanatic12 chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Fantastic! I've never really put a lot of thought into Soda's or Darry's reactions. It was just like Steve to tease, and Darry to worry. I do wonder if Darry or Soda's reactions were a little over-the-top, just because 1) they probably would have noticed Pony getting serious with a girl sooner and 2) they had to have expected it around his age. Minor crit, though. I certainly don't mean to suggest your character portrayal is inaccurate...that was just my take on their reactions.
Thank you for this well-written piece! :0)
| lala999 chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
This story is ok. is this stry going to be a romance story? If you sequel this story, don't put a sex scene in it. It would be OOC for Pony to do that.