Reviews for Winter Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hi ~ there |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, this was really cute _ Especially the part where they kissed. They both seemed very in character. It was sweet without being sappy, and that's always hard to do with a romance. Thanks, I enjoyed this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! Nice to see u made fanfic showing Thomas-Helga as a couple, with Soran nowhere near in their world. (Wish that's how the series went) |
![]() ![]() *squeal* ThomaxHelga!I just luv them so much! MORE PLZ! |
![]() ![]() CUTE! I LOVE YAH! I LOVE FANTASTIC CHILDREN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome!hope u would type more stories for this couple,I just love them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, well in the first part you use " His" and "He" WAY to much second, it's the first chapter and they are already kissing? There's no exposition, which makes it seem to me, like a fanfiction that was written just for the sake of writing one and putting one up. If your going to write a fan fiction, make sure it's a GOOD one that will attract fans. Because fans like GOOD fanfiction |