Reviews for Tropic of Virgo
blueeyedcherry chapter 6 . 3/10
That whole last part, the guitar and the singing ... that was one of the most intense things I've ever read. You brought that to life in an amazing way.

Edward gets so pissy lol. He obviously wants to stake a claim to her. I wonder how long it'll take before this happens?

xo
blueeyedcherry chapter 5 . 3/10
I love my coffee with just a tiny hint of cream. Lavazza is my favorite. :)

I snorted when she chewed him out for his driving. Lolol.

xo
blueeyedcherry chapter 4 . 3/5
So glad she's okay. And kudos to him for moving so fast.

I know I said this before, but I love how this is moving along just like the book, but with your storytelling added and the plot all twisted. And your writing is so vivid and descriptive.

I can't wait until these two figure out who they are online too.

xo
blueeyedcherry chapter 3 . 3/5
Good lord. I can only imagine the potential he has to make the girls swoon. That last scene... my my my.

I really want to fast forward and see if they get together. But I'll be good and keep going. Lol.

xo
blueeyedcherry chapter 2 . 3/5
Yes yes yes!

I love how you've kept so many of the original Twilight elements.

And the description of how her voice sounded to him ... chills.

xo
blueeyedcherry chapter 1 . 3/5
Oh this one sounds like it'll be fun to read!

I'm guessing their paths will cross at some point? Hmmm...

xo
Jessie the twilight girl chapter 3 . 2/19
That I had the eyes of an old soul. He said he had strange dreams of me being possessed by his mother on a sandy beach. It just sounds so bad ass, especially since my eyes are a simple greanish brown.
Jessie the twilight girl chapter 2 . 2/19
Kept me on the edge of my seat the whole damn chapter. Loved it!
Jessie the twilight girl chapter 1 . 2/19
Wow, amazing writing
LaPumuckl chapter 37 . 2/18
This really was an awesome ride, and I loved how they found each other online first but just as deeply connected as they ended in "in reality" ;)

Thank you for sharing their stor
Guest chapter 34 . 2/9
Just sauce nothing else
kayk806 chapter 37 . 2/8
simply put...amazing. awesome job!
kiki2485 chapter 37 . 2/8
Please, please tell me there will be a sequel...
2hot2blegal chapter 37 . 2/7
simply amazing.
Guest chapter 24 . 2/7
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