Reviews for Tropic of Virgo
marigold123 chapter 12 . 4/14/2009
Gah! talk about sexxy!

Imagery:

"I’d seen him, playing darts, his body tense and his eyes all hot and that half smile from hell." Smokin

"And then his mouth was finally on mine, whispering words against my lips that made no sense, but curled down my throat as I breathed them in." Breathless

“I’d guess a six foot two tall bird of prey with green eyes and a leather jacket?" Deadly combinations

Older songs: Yesterday-The Beatles, You've Lost that Lovin Feelin-The Righteous Bros, Come as You Are-Nirvana

Newer: Gravity-John Mayer. Viva la Vida-Coldplay, How to Save a Life-The Fray...tho I still listen to them.
ayartee chapter 12 . 4/14/2009
I'm interested to find out how they will discover they are online buddies. Great chapter
paralogy chapter 12 . 4/14/2009
OMG I am dying over here, girl! Did Edward just figure out that she is Ordinary_Girl! AH! I'd tell you to update soon, but that probably gets annoying.. so, update when you update, just don't leave us hanging TOO long.. ;)
paralogy chapter 5 . 4/13/2009
EP! I am all giddy like a little school girl over this! You're amazing and you've gained a life-long fan, girl.
paralogy chapter 3 . 4/13/2009
These first chapters have been utterly amazing. You've inspired me to start writing music again, this is all just so beautiful. Thank you! Onto the next.. :)
WriteOnTime chapter 12 . 4/13/2009
This entire story is entirely lovely. In its entirety. Poetic, and sweet, and real - that is, if real were really wonderful. Which it isn't, let's face it, but your story makes me wish it was.

Thank you. I'm here as long as you can be convinced to keep writing.
paralogy chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
I am loving this so far! I absolutely adore your writing style; so much passion and emotion found that is so rare in fan-fiction. On to the next chapter! :)
No Going Back chapter 12 . 4/13/2009
I love this story.
loca37 chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
Please update-PLEASE?
Just Another Phase chapter 11 . 4/13/2009
I wanted Bella to lose, and Edward TRIES to throw it, and wins anyway not even looking...damn...

My fav shirt is my Twilight shirt, although I'm too old to wear it out, I wear it to bed...
Just Another Phase chapter 10 . 4/13/2009
I love the fact that Bella can play darts and Edward was trying to be a show off...I want to be good at darts or pool or something, but I suck...Yippie for Bella...

definitely some sexy rock song for the jukebox...
Just Another Phase chapter 9 . 4/13/2009
I think it's really cool they got stoned and made an awesome CD...I think it's cool that they only perform straight, see it as cheating if they don't...Have I told you I really like the idea of Bella being a totally hot singer, and one of my favorite artists in Fiona Apple too? I was listening to Shadowboxer and thinking of Bella singing it with that tone an all...

Boner/Bone
Ginaaaa chapter 12 . 4/13/2009
I really like this story so far.

That's funny that you mentioned Nine Inch Nails in this chapter, because their song "You Get Me Closer To God" has been played to death by me.
Just Another Phase chapter 8 . 4/13/2009
Girls have wet dreams? I LIKE Bella singing...

I don't eat breakfast...
Just Another Phase chapter 7 . 4/13/2009
I can't believe she said that either Edward...damn fiesty girl, but I like it!

yeah, I dream all sorts of fucked up things
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