|Reviews for Tropic of Virgo|
| JanesSmile chapter 11 . 4/4/2009
that was like a lil lemon slice, fully clothed and in a bar. Delish. I love your Bella and your Edward. Amazing. Eww Jacob and Lauren is disgustingly foul. Love Love Love
Hmm shirt... Im into my old New Kids shirt from the sixth grade, I dont dig them now at all but the memories of screaming at them like an idiot and fitting into a shirt from almost 20 years ago makes me want to scream again.
| dihenydd chapter 11 . 4/4/2009
Thank you for yet another brilliant update, I found myself reading slower and slower, desperate for it not to end. The darts game was the most excruciatingly delicious foreplay.
I am interested to know how the OG D88 relationship is going to morph and whether they will be having conflicted loyalties. I loved the reusing of the Twilight words in this context (I don't usually it is so overdone).
Chief Swan, Chief Black - loved that too, I had never thought of that connection between them.
Seems like the cards are on the table now but I doubt if it is going to be plain sailing... Something always seems to come between them.
Will they get to sing together now?
| halfadash chapter 11 . 4/4/2009
my favorite t-shirt has a hippo shrugging, and it says "honestly, i was never that hungry hungry." makes me laugh every time.
great chapter, i'm glad they're finally getting somewhere.
| belovedbeauty chapter 11 . 4/4/2009
I want one like she has! ;D
I loved this. I love Edward's pov.
I really, really, do.
Uhm, favorite t-shirt? My Thor Shirt.
It's pretty rad.
| kaypgirl chapter 11 . 4/4/2009
Girly squeal! He finally stopped with the denial, even if it was only to himself.
| drkvctry chapter 11 . 4/4/2009
i live in midtown, the heart of sacramento, ca
and it is a hodie..i dont tend to wear tshirts
| mjinaspen chapter 11 . 4/4/2009
I fucking love your Edward. And, I'm psyched to see what happens when they find out that they're each others online pals.
| KissMeJacob chapter 11 . 4/4/2009
Aw loved it!
I knew Edward was in love with her too D
My favorite is an old Alkaline Trio band tee. I've had it for about 8 years and it was a gift from a friend. He wore it before I did so its got lots of sentimental value :]
Please keep the great chapters coming!
| TwirlGrrl chapter 11 . 4/4/2009
I don't think I stopped grinning throughout the entire chapter. Well, except for that gross Lauren part ;)
Oh and you faked us out! Not only are you good at the whole music-sex thing, but apparently you can also write darts-sex. Those are some skillz chica!
My favorite t-shirt? I actually have two. My Ravelry "Where Are Your Stitches At?" shirt, and a very VERY threadbare Grateful Dead tiedye dating back to the early 90s.
| Amber Energi chapter 11 . 4/4/2009
Seriously, I LOVE this story. YOu are an AWESOME writer, your writing absolutely captivates me. I am officially a HUGE FAN.
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/3/2009
es' "Shine" - excellent.
| pippapear chapter 11 . 4/3/2009
Incredible chapter. I adore it.
Words are failing me. You write magnificently.
| iusedtoknit chapter 11 . 4/3/2009
'Disagree (1)' is on my favorite shirt. For this you get 'Love (eleventy hundred)'
| KnitaSaur chapter 11 . 4/3/2009
I love your Bella. I really do, I think that she and I would get along great. She is simply adorable.
My favorite t-shirt is super-soft, fits like a dream and is black with "VOTE" written across the chest in green letters. Close second is my organic cotton Mutts shirt, but it's a tad too small for anything but nightwear.
| TLammy chapter 11 . 4/3/2009
Favorite t-shirt hm, any one of my husband's. Great chapter, loved the interaction and the realization that he loves her ;) Can't wait for more.