|Reviews for Tropic of Virgo|
| Sunshine83 chapter 9 . 3/27/2009
Another awesome chapter!
| Raewright chapter 9 . 3/27/2009
This story could seem so far fetched but your writing makes it seem completely real. There is a constant undercurrent that never lets up, in fact you seem to be slowly building to an explosion (discovery on many levels?). Great pacing. It make this story addictive!
| cheddah chapter 9 . 3/27/2009
chpt rocked. cannot wait for these two to just get it on! haha!
see u on the thread blue
| feathersmmmm chapter 9 . 3/27/2009
damn girl, this is some of the best sexual tension I have ever read, and I read way to much of this stuff. I would love to rec this fic in my next chapter, cool with you?
| KnittedSpecks chapter 9 . 3/27/2009
You are doing awesome with the lemony teasing between Edward and Bella, M'dear. This chapter was so HOT!
| vysed chapter 9 . 3/27/2009
Great chapter. I hate it when your chapters end! *sigh* I'll just have to wait. Thank you so much for updating.
And I'd have to say, silly as it sounds... but we always said, "cookie". I think it evolved from some sick joke we had going about girl scouts. We were dumb! LOL
| saraf312 chapter 9 . 3/27/2009
“You should go in, Bella,” he whispered, “before I do something I’ll regret later.”
“Would you really regret it?” I breathed.
“No.” His eyes were hot as fire.
SIGH. I wish Edward would just let go.
I really love this story. I haven't reviewed it yet but I wanted to let you know it's one of my favorites. I really can't wait to see how everything plays out. Especially when they eventually figure out that they are each other's Ordinary_Girl and Debussy_88.
| taradellv chapter 9 . 3/27/2009
Ahh! I love this story! You are doing an amazing job and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
| TwilightVicki chapter 9 . 3/27/2009
Aw, Bella really does have such bad stage fright. I can relate, poor thing. The sexual tension between Bella and Edward is amazing. Great chapter.
| Hopeless.Romantic.Inc chapter 9 . 3/27/2009
Anothe rhit, yet again. But why couldn't you have let them kiss. WHY? Its killing me here! Anyway, to your question, I think "V-JJ' is just plain funny and Emmett's right about the flower, but thats just wierd.
Male: One eyed trouser snake, just funny shaft or manhood
Female: Jugs-trust me they don't look like tham, so, WHAT THE?
Little Pink Box-interesting womanhood or pulsing/hot centre
Ciao and bye for now!
| Dawn ofthe Dead chapter 9 . 3/27/2009
Dawn's favorite anatomical euphemism for ladies:
puss (never knew it was swedish for kiss, though)
For guys I usually just say dick or junk. Haha.
Amazing chapter. The tension between these two is insane! I'm off the twi boards!
| lucylu0508 chapter 9 . 3/27/2009
that was fabulous!
you are a genius Blue. Pure genius.
| itidiot chapter 9 . 3/27/2009
Really good chapter! Yeah! Their attraction is kinda out there now.
| adoraklutz chapter 9 . 3/27/2009
Oh so good. A great way to wake up! The way E and B are careening towards and around each other is so fascinating. They keep getting close and then one of 'em always runs away. Eeps! Stop running kids! This chapter, like your others, is so engaging. I even got chills when Bella scraped her chair on the floor in Bio - it was like I could hear it!
the eccentric warmth of the Cullen house
Beautiful boy-man jerk with silky soft hair all mussed up and sexy that I had yet to run my fingers through, though I had felt it on my cheek and tickling my ear when I sat with him while he sang.
After five years of white roses,
She plants you a rainbow
And I finally have hope
I’ve done right by your charge.
I would send you soft words, but I cannot whisper.
(So poetic. Simple yet powerful.)
“You can’t avoid me forever.”
“Watch me,” she challenged, belligerent and blushing.
(LOL. If I were Bella at this point I would have fallen over dead.)
“Then why did you record it? We don’t even go downstairs when we’re drunk or stoned. You know that!”
“Bella, I have to destroy the disc.” His voice was harsh. “We don’t record when we’re fucked up.”
(I don't get this rule - will it be explained more later?)
“So, what happened to no secrets between us, Alice?”
She stiffened in her seat and shot me a hard look. “Don’t even go there, twin. Not without explaining why you’ve been checking your e-mail every hour on the hour for the past week.”
(Yes. Way to call him on it twin!)
Indy techno, obnoxious enough to disrupt any mood
(Haha, this is true.)
I reached out at swiped the cap from her lemonade bottle and spun it like a top. When it wobbled towards her, she reached out and grabbed it, and sent it spinning back, but she didn’t look up.
(Yes! I love the lemonade cap part of MS!)
“Why does he keep doing that?” I heard Bella complain.
(LOL. If only you knew, Bella.)
The world was askew, but I’d been here before; it smelled familiar, spice and soap and masculine skin. I was folded into warmth, knees and shoulders supported by steel sinew arms. I uncurled a hand and touched his chest.
(Guh...I want to be there...)
He was stroking the back of my hand with his thumb, and I was so aware of his touch that I wanted to squirm in my seat.
“You could do it again?”
“Sure, if Alice is up to it. It was fun.”
He grinned, and looked at me out of the corner of his eyes. “I wish I could have been there.”
(Oh I very much hope we get to see/read this scene!)
| bug2001 chapter 9 . 3/27/2009
Fantastic chapter. I had many more favorite lines than this, but that would have involved copying & pasting the whole chapter:
"... although she tended to anticipate too early." - as Alice tends to do. :)
"I was his, whether he wanted me or not. Jerk."
Wondering if you're going to go further with the Edward/Alice/Mom part of the chapter ... it was good stuff. I also liked how you took the fainting scene from the book and made it your own to fit your characters. Love this story so much. Thanks for writing!