Reviews for Tropic of Virgo
Guest chapter 21 . 11/16/2021
Just found your story and loving it. So poignantly delighted by the inclusion and emphasis on Angel from Montgomery in this chapter. Sadly losing that beautiful soul last year bringing a tear and remembrances. Was lucky enough to see him in concert several times, always a wonderful experience. Funnily enough I was always running into him around town, every where from restaurants, movies and even pediatrician office.

Your description made me long to hear Edward, Alice and Bella’s version of the song
quartkneerocks chapter 1 . 11/13/2021
Love this story, reread after a decade, still amazing. Can’t stop thinking about Rumors, and I the author can make opening a honey bear seem obscene. Will you be my friend?
optional-fiend chapter 12 . 9/11/2021
Avicii Levels. But I'll never stop listening
optional-fiend chapter 11 . 9/11/2021
What's the Cullen/Res beef this time? There's always something
optional-fiend chapter 10 . 9/11/2021
Where do these kids get all their disposable income
optional-fiend chapter 9 . 9/11/2021
Bloodmoon
optional-fiend chapter 8 . 9/10/2021
No breakfast.
Ooh a festival to prepare for!
optional-fiend chapter 7 . 9/10/2021
I don't dream like that. I missed their words this chapter
optional-fiend chapter 6 . 9/10/2021
Did someone put a sign on my back that says 'I do anal'? XD XD
The writing of R & Bs duet was magic
optional-fiend chapter 5 . 9/10/2021
Black.
optional-fiend chapter 4 . 9/10/2021
The Rosetta stone is on my keychain.
"Twin always knew what I was going to do next, and I could practically read her mind" subtle nod, made me giggle
optional-fiend chapter 3 . 9/10/2021
I get compliments on my steady head with an eyeliner but the most fabulous thing anyone has said about my eyes is "big. Scary big." People aren't so charming in real life as they are in fics...
optional-fiend chapter 2 . 9/10/2021
Half a bottle of champagne before even leaving the house and then bourbon 2 hours into school? XD how do they make it through the rest of the day.
I love the way you write though
optional-fiend chapter 1 . 9/10/2021
I've read this before over 10 years ago and have now hunted down the fic I remember as the one where E & B are communicating online without knowing who the other person is. Glad I've tracked it down for a re-read. I love the poetry but the thing that jarred me out of the writing from c1 - is it normal/common for 17 year olds to have breast augmentations in the US? I think you're trying to set this up as B being the polar opposite of J/other girls E is around once she arrives but cosmetic surgery and massive amounts of underage drinking/drug use just doesn't correlate with high school for me. Maybe the setting would have worked better if they were at university/early 20s.

Enjoy your writing style and can't wait to come across all the details I've long forgotten
MissWM chapter 37 . 6/1/2021
This was not what I was expecting from the summary. I never thought it'd be placed in high school hahaha and this was really, really good. Thanks for sharing!

I've got some conflicted feelings about e and b's first time, because, well, it was fucked up even if, at the time, she did not know he was drugged. I would've thought that could bring some trauma, u know? It is scary shit. Even if it ended up being with the person he wanted to have sex with.

And James SHOULD not be the only one in trouble with the police. I mean, omg, he was dealing drugs but he had NOTHING to do with the whole rophynol thing. I hope Victoria answered for that. It was not that clear.

Finally, I was so in love with spark and pretty boy. They were cute and sweet and crazy about each other and stupid as well (there were times I wanted to smack them in their heads). I had a great time reading this :)
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