Incredible writing and excellent story, I was hooked the whole way through. I wish I knew what you were up to now, I hope you still write

I love this story. I am seriously obsessed. But I do have to call into question how Bella took advantage of Edward. Despite the fact that he was all too willing before and after doesn’t romanticize the fact that Bella took advantage of him. I just hate that part. If that part was cut this story would be perfect, but still no cap Bella slick had sex with Edward before getting his consent. He’s not an angel but he still that’s very questionable behavior that if he really felt some type of way he could call it rape. But seriously tho I come back and read the series all the time but avoid that part specifically.

Love your writing. Great story

That’s huge. Love the Rosalie- Bella connection

Bravo

Love their fireworks and silent banter. Great writing

All these years of reading FF and I’ve never come across this. Another fan recommended an ‘oldie but a goodie’. Very interested to read more.

Great story. Also loved the sequel from another perspective. Love it.

fucking hell emmett just might be my dream man

What a freaking awesome story! I loved it from start to finish. You are a very talented writer.

Love Love Love your writing. It's thst simple. SO very good.

I've read this story a hundred times and every time it strips me naked. I can read this a hundred more times and never tire of it. If you have a soundtrack for this please share because it would only add to it while reading. Forever a devoted reader waiting to be stripped by the pretty boy with all the pretty words.

Awesome story loved it!

I’m facing a mountain of paperwork. We’re selling our business, and here I am glued to this FOR THE SECOND TIME! I had forgotten how good it is. Oh well...

HINDI GOD DANCE STATUES?! With multiple arms? Gawd, look up your Hinduism.