|Reviews for Barely Breathing|
| Nightwing 509 chapter 3 . 6/30/2012
I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you had McGee showhimself to Abby. Please update soon.
| Person chapter 3 . 6/11/2012
I would really like you to go on with this story, its really good and one of my favorites on the site! Please update soon!
| shialuvr222 chapter 3 . 8/6/2011
Oh, please continue. This is really good :)
| jjd022980 chapter 3 . 10/25/2010
good story..hope you update it it soon! Want to see Tony faint!
| Chels0320 LovingTheSongbird chapter 3 . 9/17/2010
that story was great! I loved the plot and I was very moved with it... I hope they don't kill anymore of the main cast. Loved the Ziva bit. Chimera was funny with .
| chazza1331 chapter 3 . 8/15/2010
love it! please update soon!
| bobbybobboo chapter 3 . 7/10/2010
LOL THIS STORY IS SO FUNNY I HOPE TONY FAINTS PLEASE CONTINUE
| smartkid37 chapter 3 . 12/31/2009
please continue this. Gibbs and Ducky need to be included; and to show that they miss him too.
and yes, he needs to be either brought back or allowed closure.
| babygirl12020 chapter 3 . 12/20/2009
please finish this story
| whatweareafreaidof chapter 3 . 12/12/2009
i want tim to walk in on ziva showing and ziva to yell "i going to kill you" tim said "i am already died, so there"
| A Reader chapter 3 . 11/26/2009
It's really good. Please write some more! I love the idea of him being a ghost...but I think he needs to come back to life somehow...XD
| Person chapter 3 . 11/21/2009
Awesome. Update soon
| MelodicMisery chapter 3 . 11/7/2009
this is really good! one of the first stories i've read for ncis and i must say, it's amazing. ;) it's so sad that mcgee's dead. :( but i'm loving this story. :) update soon.
| Werewolfbites chapter 3 . 9/10/2009
This is really good, it is by far one of the most interesting stories i've read...I hope it has a good ending!
| Mwhahahaha18 chapter 3 . 8/17/2009
I hope you come back to this because it looks like its going to be a good story!