Reviews for New Moon Twist
alixandria chapter 9 . 7/15
Yay! Gotta love Charlie!
alixandria chapter 7 . 7/15
Awesome!
alixandria chapter 6 . 7/15
Laurant or Edward?
alixandria chapter 5 . 7/15
Lol... But this could be when Jacob imprints on Bella?
alixandria chapter 4 . 7/15
Ah, so Jacob hasn't phased yet... Awesome!*
alixandria chapter 3 . 7/15
Jacob is so much better for Bella, he can truly make her happy and give her what .
alixandria chapter 2 . 7/15
I hope Bella chooses to stay with Jake forever?!
alixandria chapter 1 . 7/15
I love it!
corkykellems chapter 13 . 1/9/2012
I almost stopped reading LOL...I believe Bella should have chosen Jacob...There are way to many Edard/Bella stories, and not enough Jake/Bella...Thanks for giving Jake the chance to be with Her..Great Storie, so far

Corky
Mamahound chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
I read it ryt up until ur poll. Dumb and mre dumb change th jacb bella pairng 2 dumwrd n smela. N i reali lykd the begning of th stori whr sh hd a bakbne
Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 14 . 6/24/2010
good story
princess-black chapter 14 . 3/22/2010
wow i love dis story which surprises me as i normally ike seriously twisted ones but i felt really sad today and it cheered me up i really love jacob and there child is called sarah(which is also my name) heheheh love da story
gen-ana chapter 14 . 12/3/2009
jacob's mothers name and bella's mothers name niceand a great story thank you for changing it to jacob!1
BeachGirl114 chapter 14 . 12/3/2009
I love the story
Usagi Sora chapter 14 . 11/3/2009
Your dialogue was very good, however to flesh out the story more and make it more appealing to an audience I would suggest writing some 'background' info or a description of what is happening between the characters, you have some but not enough to paint a full picture of what is happening, you simply give a sketch of what is happening. Keep up the good work, and good luck on your next work.
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