Reviews for New Moon Twist
corkykellems chapter 13 . 1/9/2012
I almost stopped reading LOL...I believe Bella should have chosen Jacob...There are way to many Edard/Bella stories, and not enough Jake/Bella...Thanks for giving Jake the chance to be with Her..Great Storie, so far

Corky
Mamahound chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
I read it ryt up until ur poll. Dumb and mre dumb change th jacb bella pairng 2 dumwrd n smela. N i reali lykd the begning of th stori whr sh hd a bakbne
Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 14 . 6/24/2010
good story
princess-black chapter 14 . 3/22/2010
wow i love dis story which surprises me as i normally ike seriously twisted ones but i felt really sad today and it cheered me up i really love jacob and there child is called sarah(which is also my name) heheheh love da story
gen-ana chapter 14 . 12/3/2009
jacob's mothers name and bella's mothers name niceand a great story thank you for changing it to jacob!1
BeachGirl114 chapter 14 . 12/3/2009
I love the story
Usagi Sora chapter 14 . 11/3/2009
Your dialogue was very good, however to flesh out the story more and make it more appealing to an audience I would suggest writing some 'background' info or a description of what is happening between the characters, you have some but not enough to paint a full picture of what is happening, you simply give a sketch of what is happening. Keep up the good work, and good luck on your next work.
Kathy Hiester chapter 14 . 11/2/2009
Good ending !
ladybug82896 chapter 14 . 11/2/2009
AW!:D
goldengirl62 chapter 14 . 11/2/2009
yeah!

i am so glad she stayed with jake

and they had a baby,makes it better:)
goldengirl62 chapter 12 . 11/2/2009
well, thank god for that:)

yeah!

now i will continue reading woohoo!
ladybug82896 chapter 12 . 11/2/2009
sorry i was so hard on u. I'm usualy not but i was in the middle of a mood swing and took it out on u. I even yelled at my mom and got grounded it was so bad.

sorry.
uniquepixiebubblefreak chapter 12 . 10/26/2009
thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou

THANKYOU you have made me so happy love the story but would have had to stop reading if it ended bella and edward and besides i dont know how bella could fight the bond which is imprinting :) so happy LOVE the story keep writing x
twimama77 chapter 12 . 10/26/2009
i am glad it is still bella and jake
skies never so blue chapter 12 . 10/26/2009
Please let Bella get back together.

TEAM EDWARD RULES!
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