Reviews for Deal With The Devil
Guest chapter 2 . 8/24/2014
what happens to my kurumu and don't say shes tsukunes tsukune can eat a dick well my kurumu be ok but anyway love ur fanfic
radizt chapter 5 . 7/3/2014
Hmmm...first,second,and third chapters are great,forth one OK,the rest just *due to the lack of better words im going to say dumb*.

Please put more sex stuff in it,also make kurumu choke tsukune with her breasts more hard feelings...i hope
de killer chapter 11 . 5/16/2013
this story was AWESOME!… though it was kind of weird with the somewhat poetic ending. good job.
marceline Avadee chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
omg! i love this...o.o
Kyle Dowds chapter 4 . 6/27/2012
You arent very great at this viewer yokai only transmit video they cannot transmit sound. You need to start reading rosario vampire season 2 or reread it and thouroughly not just skim through it.
Kyle Dowds chapter 3 . 6/27/2012
Sorry accidentally sent my last. .Tsukune was vital to the survival of the world. You should have included this into rens explanation to kurumu of what was going on. 2 Not the hades kings, they are called The Three Dark Lords. 3 You also need to know the main characters last names like Mizore Shirayuki instead of mizore sno wommanI am on ch4 and it is great except for the things above.
Kyle Dowds chapter 3 . 6/27/2012
You obviously did not read the second season of the manga otherwise you would know there are gaps in your story and some typos. 1 the date is june ? 2012 right now but anyway in the current chapters of rosario vampire they have to save the world from alucard and I think her name is akuha if im wrong its pretty close. Tsukune had to undergo the human modification technique. He had to have to
rafael chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
awesome fan fiction
Rafael chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
this fan fiction was really epic and i think they should make up a plot in the anime
SakuraXxXIchigo chapter 9 . 1/10/2011
This was a truly great chapter!

Woot! Vampie Moka is back D And is kicking butt as usual!
SakuraXxXIchigo chapter 8 . 1/10/2011
Why would Ren want to marry?

There is no WAY they would let her marry him!

This was a truly great chapter! I loved the michaels sword, great part! Something that can defeat Ren! I find it funny that we don't call him the devil, we still call him Ren.
SakuraXxXIchigo chapter 7 . 12/30/2010
WOAH! That was SO unexpected! Either that or I'm just slow. I actually did not expect him to be the devil, I thought that the title was a metaphor (Is that the word I'm looking for?)
SakuraXxXIchigo chapter 6 . 12/9/2010
EPICNESS! You did fine on the fight scenes! I could really picture it happening. You are very descriptive, well done!
SakuraXxXIchigonot logged in chapter 5 . 12/9/2010

Yeah it was pretty hot and I LOVED the ending though!

OMGZ They found Ruby!
SakuraXxXIchigonot logged in chapter 4 . 12/9/2010
Awesome chapter!

Grrr. Ren is such an a-hole!
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