Reviews for What They Made Me
Guest chapter 12 . 1/2
She should never forgive him! Never!
Guest chapter 13 . 6/5/2015
please continue
Guest chapter 13 . 4/8/2015
im so sorry that your having split custity i can only imagine the pain u must be fealing
Guest chapter 9 . 5/11/2013
The Cullens are so selfish in this story, not caring about Bella really... sorry but that's how I feel
robsten4ever chapter 13 . 12/17/2012
Really goood! Plz update
Guest chapter 13 . 7/18/2012
plzzzzzzzzzzz update its been years
blood vampress chapter 13 . 7/9/2012
That was a very good story. There were a couple of errors but they didn't effect the storyline.
avengingcoulson chapter 13 . 1/3/2012
You should watch a very Potter musical.
Monica chapter 13 . 7/19/2011
Wow! It's really good! I was thinking, that she shouldn't have forgave he so fast no matter the truth.
yourangelic-devil chapter 13 . 2/24/2011
awesum story line !
emmy pemmy chapter 13 . 1/29/2011
Hello! I love this story. Please can you continue writing it? If you can't think of how to continue, read it from the begining, as if it's someone elses story, you should get some new ideas.:) x
turtlemister chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
The main thing about this chapter that I think could have made it better is Bella's powers. I think that it is an awesome power, but I think it is a little too much and takes away from the story. If it's too easy for her to eliminate enemies or control others, there is alot less you can do with the plot. Same with her position with the Volturi: it just seems too easy and makes the whole thing seem fake. Apart from that, though, it is well written with only the occasional minor error. Better than alot of the other stories that I have read here. Keep it up.
principessa-della-mafia chapter 4 . 6/30/2010
The volturi were never evil they are still a family that is miss understood. Though aro is power hungry. i love this story i like the new bella.
SCREAMM chapter 13 . 6/18/2010
please try to keep this story up, it's awesome!
MyaSarae chapter 13 . 12/9/2009
This story is so absolutely amazing I hope that you can update it eventually.I am sorry to hear about your computer.
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