|Reviews for Half Alive|
| MalevolentDarkness16 chapter 4 . 2h
Ventus is a cinnamon bun and national treasure. He's too precious for anyone to bully and needs to be cherished.
| Stick Figure man chapter 29 . 7/13/2016
I have to say at the start I really wasn't a fan of the story since I found Namine hard to read about at the very start but you quickly turned that around with how you wrote about Roxas and as we gained some more insight to how Namine feels about everything. But either way just wanted to say nice job.
| t0fura chapter 29 . 7/26/2015
XION GOT HER HAPPY ENDING LOLOL
Ah~ Roxas still blind w, miracles can't always happen, eh? But it's kay. Hahahaha.
Thanks for writing a great series.
| t0fura chapter 27 . 7/26/2015
Gawd, Xion is such a great friend.
No but good job Namine, I love you too.
| t0fura chapter 26 . 7/26/2015
lol, I wasn't gonna review every chapter and just wait, but every chapter just needs a reaction!
OMG, I ALMOST WANT TO SHIP XION AND ROXAS!
THE HUMILIATION AT THE PARTY. DAMN.
| t0fura chapter 25 . 7/26/2015
Xion, you so cray! But this lil spat is over. A little too soon~
Dinner happened too in this chapter, wow. So much development. I really do adore this Namine w
Thanks for writing!
| Mercy2428 chapter 1 . 4/28/2015
Damn I remember this way back...way back..from my old account and it is as good as before with some improvements here and there XD
| Strikeman chapter 16 . 10/12/2014
I'm on chapter 16. Loved that Sea salt ice cream reference. I hope the rest of the story is as good as this half.
| Niebla N chapter 29 . 6/27/2014
I'm really happy to have found this fic (especially because have found it finished ... (wait there is not the easiest thing in the world for me)) although I believe that some parts could have been more detailed / extended / worked (also to my delight) I really liked the end result...
Oh also find amazing the fact that you have had the "courage" that few have: to let the blind boy be blind (gee, unnerve me to see stories where the author or rolls all about it (for sheer lack of research and logical notions) or kills himself trying to cure this "defect" (I disagree, it's a feature) of the character, usually killing the meaning of it or just to give an idea of that 'happily ever after' only exist if the character could come back to see ... (Hehe... Ignore the outburst)
So I'm here to compliment your story by what I saw was rewritten (or something) and I'm sure it must have been pleasing to improve it. I hope to find more such stories and I'm really grateful that you have written it.
So sorry for my bad english (I really really hope you understand) and keep writing enough.
Kisses from Nieb:)
| noel k chapter 29 . 1/30/2014
I read this story like 2 years ago I guess, I don't remember. This is a magnificent piece of work/writing I really enjoyed it. The updated chapters are awesome. I was looking through one of my old journal where I kept track of my favorites fanfics and I saw this story title so I decided to check it out. Gosh I Started reading immediately. :-)
| HopeSeiketsu chapter 7 . 1/21/2014
You screwed up the name it was stryfe as in Clouds' last name
| 456789087543234567890 chapter 8 . 12/15/2013
LOL, I never thought that I'd see the day that Naminé would be jealous. Aww, Roxas and Xion are just soo cute together. :) Boy, I guess that Xion should really watch her back now...
It's funny how Naminé is cringing at the very thought of her being jealous of another girl. Especially when she believes that everyone should be jealous of her, LOL. Somehow I don't think that her plan to get Xion or Roxas to switch seats is going to go over very well...
Uh-oh. Roxas nearly slipped up on that one. Good thing that Xion didn't catch on. It's pretty interesting that he lived on Destiny Islands for thirteen or fourteen years beforehand. Good thing he used his dad getting transferred back to his job here as a cover-up. :)
I can see where Xion would worry about embarrassing herself in front of Roxas, but she doesn't even have a clue that he's blind. I'm wondering how both Naminé and Xion will react when they find out that he's blind. :/
Well, it looks like Roxas had just about caught himself in another lie. I bet that he's never been so relieved to be interrupted by Naminé. Or maybe not... Poor Roxas... It looks like he's about to get stuck in the middle of a girl fight... LOL, for the record, Xion is awesome! x3 I just loved her line, “Really? Then do you mind riding one of your brooms back to your castle so we can practice?” xDDD
Aww, how cute. :) Naminé actually caught herself blushing due to Roxas' cute little nickname for her. x3 Typical. Of course she'd never let Roxas catch on to something like that because she doesn't want him to think that she's a freak.
And so Naminé finally pulls one over Xion by arranging to meet with Roxas before school tomorrow – or so she thought. That is until Xion literally drags Roxas out the door before Naminé has another chance to get a word in. xD This sure makes me wonder what Naminé is going to do about Xion. You did a great on this! :D As always, keep up the great work and I'll be looking forward to reading more in the near future! :DDD
xXx Angel xXx
| EternallySky chapter 29 . 8/29/2013
An amazing story. I'm not going to lie I avoided reading you're story because I knew it was wonderful and it was also incomplete... I couldn't bear to wait for a next update, the suspense is too much haha. It's been such a long while since a good KH story came out for RxN!
| Riilustra -Your Sweetest SIN chapter 29 . 8/20/2013
OMG! I MISSED THIS?! IM SOO SORRY! I"VE BEEN SO BUSY! FORGIVE ME!
Im a horrible person! I don't even deserve to live! I'm trash! Scum! Ahhh! I'm so sorry I didn't review earlier :( I was busy with getting ready for School an Chores -.- pfft, chores.
The Epilogue was great! I was so happy they got married! AND putting Vanitas with Xion was perfect just as much as you put Ventus with Fuu (Cause I likie those pairings:D) And of course Sora an Kairi! Having kids? Everyone saw that coming ;D lol I kinda forgot Roxy was blind :O lol I see what you did there with the White an Blue theme! GREAT JOB! Sora's an Kairi's kids name was was a perfect name! Must've been hard to find a name for their kid lol AWW MAN! I don't have a tumblr :( Damn.. I won't be able to hear the track for the story! xc ... Gonna miss this Story! I can honsetly say that this story lead me here to FanFiction! Thank you.
It feels like a piece of my heart is gone now.. but It will be revived when Torn Between You begins:D!
I swear I will Review the cr p outta that Story.. and that's a Promise. xD lol That story seems very interesting an I can't wait for it to Begin XP I say you should update that story now v.v lol!
.!A Perfect Ending For A Perfect Couple!.
.As One Book Closes For The Couple, Another Opens. Gonna Miss This Story!
| Shadow-Artist-13 chapter 29 . 8/18/2013
THIS WAS AMAZING IM LIKE CRYING AND LAUGHING AND OMG JUST...WOW! this is like my FAVORITE STORY OF ALL TIME! LOVE IT!