|Reviews for Two Letters|
| Kaizen Kitty chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
While this is very romantic and smartly composed, for me it lacks something. It lacks scenes. Emotional scenes between L and Mello. Too much description and too little action. I also think you use too many adjectives per sentence.
| lighter-kun chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
wtf omg that was beautiful and so well written and hey why are you so amazing!? the part where mello is being compared to being love ! how do you think of things like that? its so beautiful! and GAH L X MELLO! this was...perfect :")
| LawliLover chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
*in a whisper*
| Seith chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Not a pairing I would usually read, but this was exeptionally and beautifully written. You really had me sucked in with the first few lines. Great style and interesting idea. I enjoyed it very much.
| Nihil Forem chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
That was touching... I can really appreciate the time lapses in this. You've made L and Mello's relationship timeless and beautiful.
| phollie chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
This was... O_O
I don't know how to put it into words.
There aren't many times that I can really get into LxMello, but you made the pairing work on so many levels that I've lost count. Your understanding of the psychological sides of each character is what really made this so beautiful. You probed deeper into both L and Mello that made this story not only stunning, but believable and alive and just wonderful.
| bearfuck chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
DAH THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL.
I'd say more, but I honestly have nothing else to say.
| Cherrytoast chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Wow, beautiful. There isn't enough MelloxL out there, and I love the way you show L's tortured feelings so well. Lovely.
| Moth Gypsy chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Ive never seriously considered this pairing before, and it doesnt totally click with me, but you pulled it of nicely. and of course, your writing style is so incredibly beautiful and subtly fatalistic, that i think i could enjoy anything you write ;)
these lines particularly are amazing "if he could see the truth, could know the mystery, could point to every atom and explain. He thinks that nothing would be beautiful anymore."
| Dlvvanzor chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Huh. Interesting. Well written as usual.
I appreciated the nod to the friendship between Mello and Matt, even though Matt's straight (gasp!) and Mello's after L in this one. -
| mazotori chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
OMG THIS WSA BEAUTIFUL
WONDERFULLY WRITTEN TOO
| DarogaDaae chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Oh my god.
Oh my god.
Oh. My god.
I never thought I'd see the day...
My cognative functions have been severely impeded...
| Fancy Dress chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
This made me smile and tear-up just a little. I do believe L and Mello are made for each other, whether or not they realize it or us fans want to admit it. They have it in spades over other pairings as far as excitement and complication goes and that to me is more than enough to root for this pair. And you, you write them best, wondrous with a hint of waiting tragedy. Please do write more if you could because you might just be the saving grace of this ship!
| Vera-Sama chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
I loved it. L/Mello has become a favorite pairing of mine, and this story is definatly my favorite one about them so far. It seemed very...real, and I just..loved it.
| SapphireMistress chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
this was really beautiful! I loved every single word of it! This somehow made me love M and L for the moment...O_O
I REALLY LOVE IT! Made me want to cry...but I can't...so I would cry if i can...-_-'
Just really great!