Reviews for Desert Flower on the Open Sea
Cookiekitten chapter 2 . 3/23/2010
I always found Jolene to be an interesting character, and her relationship with Linebeck was always entertaining. There aren't a whole lot of fanfics with Jolene, so thank you even more for writing this! :D. The two of them seem quite in-character, which is a nice bonus.

Great job! Update sometime, if you get the chance! :)
super-rat chapter 2 . 12/12/2009
Need. more. ASAP please.

Seriously! *jumps up and down* Please, update with a new chapter soon-ish! :D
super-rat chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Brilliant chapter! :D

I'm going to read more...
Green Jacket chapter 2 . 8/14/2009
This is an awesome story, and I Do want to see more of it. Sometimes you forget about all the other characters in Phantom Hourglass, and don't put them in. Such characters are: Jolene, Oshus, Neri, and the other fairy...you know, the red one?

Anyway, yah, I'd really like to see this story continued. *clicks the story alert button*
Gemini Gamers chapter 2 . 6/20/2009
I cant believe no one has ever reviewed this. I like it, and want to see more. I wish more people would write stories with Linebeck, and Jolene. Please finish! You kept them pretty well in character too.