|Reviews for The Desert Sands|
| PECO chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
What a great opening chapter my friend.
Its good to see an author work internal pollitics/subterfuge and a bit of back-stabbing into a Tau story rather than just have them mindless and full of senseless optimism.
If i could just say one thing, try not to muddle up your use of human and tau terminology.
Like Days/rotaa and Miles/dec because it seemed like it was loosing its credibillity that it was from a Tau's point of view.
Iam really looking forward to the next chapter.
I hope its gritty and has Sandsword leading an army with kroot and crisis suits through a ruined city or grass plains.