|Reviews for Goodbye|
| Lolarosa chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
This was very good. I love how the way that she showed her love was by cleaning his house. Bella and Charlie were never ones for a lot of show of emotions. It was a bittersweet goodbye, but she had to choose. I believe this more than than the other "have your cake and eat it too" version. Good job!
| Funny-Fishes chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
I have a very hard time beliving English was your worst subject, but you probably just weren't challenged enough, because your writting tells a completely different story. Very, very good idea for BD, although I did love the actual story, I enjoyed reading what I thought should of happened.
Keep Writting :)
| Eoin Cullen chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
Love this! I always wondered how a goodbye to Charlie would have played out. Good luck on the contest!
| EmraePenne chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
| Claire Bloom chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
Oh My, I actually read this like it was Stephenie Meyer writing it! You caught them all so perfectly. Fantastic job
| hopeful wager chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
I really liked this, even though it was bittersweet. Also, it's one of the few Twifics I've seen written third person, and quite frankly that's sort of refreshing.
| dreaming in black and white chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
This is so sad! We don't often see stories like this (probably because it never happened, but yeah) and this is really sweet - I love the way you write it, especially how Bella avoided the promise to see her dad at Chrismas *tears* anyway, well done and good luck! x :)
| Alice Cullen 1534 chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
i love it
| Raegan Marie chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
Aw this is so sad! Definitely different from your other fics, but I will read this too. I'm interested to see the direction it takes.
| Addicted2JasperHale chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
this is really good, keep it up
| Rose-la Cullen chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
um... vamps don't cry.
| twilightnaley19 chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
I LOVED THIS ONESHOT IT WAS SO SAD. AWESOME JOB. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
| Inactivityispermanent chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
aww that was so sweet.
Tho I don't know if you noticed but fanfic seems to have added a random thing in the middle near the end:
They stood stock still for several minutes before Charlie took a step back,2 0clearly
Dunno why, but its daft like that sometimes.
Anyway, enjoyed that, and good luck in the contest