|Reviews for Pokémon: Battling the Enemy Within|
| TheFrogFromHell chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Wow... a promising beginning! Starting with the staring contest was great. And is it truly an invitation to Nationals... or... a trap?! I'm intrigued! Sorry to hear it's discontinued. :(
I'm going to "follow" it anyway.
Thanks for writing!
P.S. Thanks for your nice review of my Breaking Bad fic!
| Onyxx-09 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Would like to read more, please update soon ;)
| Jet the Cat chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
Nice start! A bit of a cliched ending, but that's acceptable. The staring contest made me giggle
Your spacing in this chapter seemed a little off, though. Not sure if it was 's fault or whether it was just like that when you put it in, it looked a little weird.
Anyways, I'll have my eye on this. I hope you don't give up three chapters in like a lot of authors do with this kind of story. You already have the trainers you need, right? Good luck, though! You'll need it.
JtC (AKA, Lanee)
| Orange Ratchet chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
This is pretty exciting!
I hope to see Senagy on there really soon! (I was the person who suggested him, BTW.)
| TJFS chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
| VerdantSeraphim chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
First Review!..I think...
Great start! Keep going :D