|Reviews for Midnight Mist|
| crimson blush 17 chapter 4 . 3/6/2011
| TwilightSy chapter 23 . 3/3/2011
Really good. Wish it was finished.
| SummerS2lOVE chapter 23 . 10/14/2010
hi, great chapter
happy that they kissed
kisses, anxious for next chapter
| IxxSolemnyxxSwear chapter 23 . 10/13/2010
Holy crap I CANNOT wait for more! LOVE IT!
| luv2beloved chapter 23 . 10/13/2010
Can't wait for ness to realize her true feelings for Jake! This was great...
| Laziesttiger chapter 23 . 10/12/2010
Thanks for the update, more soon please!
| Efficient Vixen chapter 23 . 10/12/2010
I enjoyed this chapter :)
| Hey there chapter 23 . 10/12/2010
| meg chapter 18 . 10/2/2010
seriously, something needs to happen between nessie and jacob. asap
| Matmatgirl chapter 22 . 10/2/2010
I love ur story! I can't wait for more!
| Silent.Strings chapter 22 . 10/1/2010
NICE CHAPTER! :D
| Laziesttiger chapter 22 . 9/30/2010
Thanks for the update - enjoyed this chapter and look forward to further developments!
| SummerS2lOVE chapter 22 . 9/29/2010
kisses,until your next chapter, hope that you can post soon
| luv2beloved chapter 22 . 9/29/2010
This was great and I am sure the family is just enjoying this new side of Ness...not!
Can't wait to see how the relationship begins to develop
| Efficient Vixen chapter 22 . 9/29/2010
Loved the masturbation scene. Loved the chapter in general.