Oh my god yes! this edward is everything and im only on the 1st chapter.

Lordy. Found your stories this past week. Let's just say, that in finding this particular lemon monstrosity (as you put it) that all my own writing has fallen off the table - along with my attention for many other things. As in, I might have missed my train stop by two stations. On my way to a field trip that I was supervising. So, merci beaucoup from a fellow Canadian. You have a grasp of the compelling in your twific narratives.

i love this story its so magical. love it love it... do you have more stories like this?

I loved! Where's part 3? So sad you didn't posted it.

Thanks for another great read! I will always hope that you can find a way to post Part 3 of the epilogue, and mark this one complete some day when we least expect it. Fingers crossed.

Hot. Sexy. Sweet. Amazing job. I loved it.

Poor girl...just wanted sone gingerale ...lol

You are brilliant bella

wow!
please finish this!

Oh, yes, I want to be into Edwards head! This defrosting is becomeing more and more interesting...

Oh, I like this story! So canon, and at the same time, so passionate. This Edward is a lot different from your Preyward, but I do like it ;)

This, as they say, is a good start. I wonder what Alice saw ... or not. Its much better It to discover it for myself.

Oh I hope that someday you will find the time to revisit this story, it's so good!

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This really hit the spot- I've been craving a "practice makes perfect" fic. Thanks for writing! Your lemons are great :P :feeds tree: