Second time reading this and I really enjoyed it, it’s such a powerful story! I would have loved to know more about how/if they reconnected with their families though

Mike and Tyler were working for King. If Bella was working for him also she probably wouldn’t have been getting sexually assaulted in the locker room. Just another point in Bella’s favor.

If Edward needed something and Bella had money would she buy it for him? Would she think less of him?
Maybe Edward should ask her that.

This is Edward’s world not Bella’s world, she just stepped into it. He should have spoke his mind to her and tell her how reckless she is. What happens when he ends up dead trying to protect her?

It probably should have been mentioned that King was behind the attack.

This is the second time I’m reading this story, and I feel somewhat empty, like I did the first time, cause I don’t feel like this story is finished. It felt quite rushed.

I would have loved to read about Bella and Edward getting married. Then there is the confrontation we all needed read about. The one with Edward, his mom and Carlisle. And Bella meeting her mom and that after the whole “Phill gets arrested”.

Overall I really loved the story. It just feel unfinished. And I hope that one day you will properly finish it. I felt like I was waiting for Edward to meet his mom again, and either they would solve their thing or he would walk away forever.

Thank you for sharing!

Love,
Messy Bronze Hair

I like Shadowboxer so far. But is Edward a vampire?

Absolutely loved this story! Thank you for sharing it xxx

I enjoyed this story a lot. Could do without the R words though.

Love love love this fic I'm gutted it's taken me 10 years to find it don't ever change it and if people get triggered about words you use and the plot they have had pretty fucking easy lives they haven't lived the lives of our Bella and Edward because I have and I totally fucking get it! Thank you for writing this would be epic to see a sequel like where they are now if you are still sound

Even though the plot feels rushed and I would take a second look for grammatical errors, I’m REALLY enjoying it as a story. Howeverthis also reflecting the age of this storyI cannot tolerate how the word “retard” has been getting used so far.

I dunno if it’s just me but i find this short ad of Dior on YT that kinda fits Shawboxer fic? Lol might be bc of rob pattinson tho.
(If u wanna check it out, just remove the spaces. Yknow. )

httpsyoutu. beOcjdar1yqW8

loved it!

I hate jams

Loved it,Well done well written, Intriguing