Reviews for Shadowboxer
PurdueLiz chapter 5 . 3/18/2009
Aw, I love that Edward found her in her truck and made her live with him. And I'm glad they didn't fight too much about it. I can understand her pride in not telling him and I can understand him being upset about her putting herself in danger. The KO she took made her amusing, and it's sweet seeing Edward taking care of her this time around. Is there a reason we didn't find out who it was? Was it someone trying to f*ck with Edward before his fight with James? Take out his girl so it screws with his head?
starfishgobo chapter 6 . 3/18/2009
...

...um...

wow...

i cant say anything right now coz im kinda spacin out on edward so...

hm...
PurdueLiz chapter 4 . 3/18/2009
Another great one. Good to see a bit of background with Edward and the guys. I don't like the fight with James either. I'd bet he definitely has something up his sleeve and it's not gonna be good. I just have this bad feeling Bella's gonna end up involved somehow. Yikes.
UrbanBlaze chapter 6 . 3/18/2009
WOW *fans self while taking a cold shower* that lemon was HOT! I found this chapter really well written, and the plot just seemed to flow nicely. I think that you made the right decision to not have Fightward tell Bella that he loves her just yet, as it fits more with how his character has been portrayed so far! I, for one, am looking forward to seeing how the relationship further develops between Edward and Bella, and I can't wait for the big scary fight with James! :)
dariussane chapter 6 . 3/18/2009
I wovld love this to be made n2 a movie! xos
Sheeijan chapter 6 . 3/18/2009
Just found this story and it's the bomb. Seriously. Fightward is incredibly sexy and Fightward combined with Protectward - priceless. He may not be able to say the words but his actions clearly speak louder. And really, I'm still a puddle of goo on the floor after his little, "you own me" comment. That was like the Edward version of "you had me at hello".

I'm all kinds of worried about the upcoming fight.

Anyway, thanks much for writing!
twilightnaley19 chapter 6 . 3/18/2009
LOVED THIS CHAPTER. LOVED THE BELLA AND EDWARD AND THE LEMONY GOODNESS. LOVED THE FEELINGS TALK AT THE END. CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
writeswithcrayons chapter 6 . 3/18/2009
I was laughing my ass off at the part where her brain was yelling "code blue! Code blue!"

And whew... I think y'all need to put a warning up there, "before reading, grab a pair of panties and a cool drink. Read on, bitches."

I can't tell you how much I love Jasper in this story. And Em, of course, but we haven't seen much of him yet :(

Can't wait for this fight, though. Looks like Bella's gonna have to stock up on the ol' first aid kit :P
sunfire04 chapter 6 . 3/18/2009
Smoke em' if ya got em' lol. Great chapter :)
tkeaton1 chapter 6 . 3/18/2009
LOL... puff puff pass! :) I can see why... that was a tasty lemon! YUM! I can see with his lifestyle why he would have trouble telling someone he loves them. Especially when he is getting ready for the fight of his "life". Im glad he at least could show her how he feels! Cant wait for next update
Hey Weirdo chapter 6 . 3/17/2009
Holy crow he practically jackhammered her!

Hot mess indeed.

Loving the lemonade.

Keep up the good work.

:D
VampsGurl chapter 6 . 3/17/2009
Just caught up this fic is amazing! Edward is a boxer how hot is that? :)

I'm looking forward to Edward's and James fight! I hope Edward kicks his ass! :) Bella could be there cheering him on.
PurdueLiz chapter 3 . 3/17/2009
Oh absolutely wonderful. Love seeing both their thoughts and how they're both falling so quickly. And even Em and Jasper recognize that she seems to be good for him. Can't wait to read the next few chapters. Will be to that first thing tomorrow (er, later today since it's almost 1am).

Had to laugh at your AN about Tanya. She really is someone you love to hate.
Namariel chapter 6 . 3/17/2009
*blinks*

I have one doubt though, about what was written, if you could answer me... in the l;ast part, you know...

Oh nevermind, I'll go re read it. *grin*

Oh, I love possessive, out of control Edward. I love the way he thinks about her, even thought he can;t voice it and has little idea as to how to demonstrate it.

Great chapter, NBNF. (btw, I'm Gaviota in Twilighted forums)
The Naughty Librarian chapter 6 . 3/17/2009
I so appreciated getting to see Bella's 'whoops' from Edward's POV. Of course, anytime we get to be inside Edward's head, I'm happy. ;)

Also, HOLY HELL can you write a LEMON! *whew!* That was just fuckhot moment after fuckhot moment, bb. And not only was the sexin' redonka, but you kept it REAL there at the end. This Edward wasn't ready for ILYs and everybody's still okay.

I know you said 'heavy shizza' is coming, but honestly, as long as you keep writing, I will keep reading. I'm loving your story come hell or heartfail.

Lu :)
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