Reviews for Old School
Dracom Blade chapter 17 . 7/11/2020
sorry to see this go unfinished i liked your writing style and this was a damn good story. take it easy hope to see more from you.
Jestersky98 chapter 13 . 3/10/2020
Honestly the shittiest chunin exam ever written
So bad that I won’t bother reading the rest of the story
Chrisfragger chapter 13 . 7/22/2019
This is fucking stupid... Why not just say that Gaara attacked him? Is he not meant to defend himself? For fucks sake...
Dzarsos chapter 2 . 5/16/2019
Jesus shit... punctuation, my dude. Punctuation. This is a pretty interesting story and reasonably well written, but every sentence is a run-on, and it's like you've never heard of the comma... I can't follow your dialogue, because it's all once solid flow.

For example, just looking up from this box: "To be honest he was but that's not to say that you can't get better but you're going to have to work hard and overcome your obsession with Sasuke he needs a friend more than anything."

It ought to read something like: "To be honest, he was, but that's not to say that you can't get better - but you're going to have to work hard... and overcome your obsession with Sasuke. He needs a friend more than anything."
Monster King chapter 17 . 4/7/2019
Great job
SinfulPride chapter 1 . 7/14/2018
Awesome premise and not bad language but everything kind of just runs on into each other. Makes it feel like everything is happening at the same time which just isnt believable. Too much too fast is not good.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/11/2018
This Naruto is worse than the one in the anime. If he was train by the old school, how come he is announcing his skill and strength to everyone he meets. Shouldnt he be more reserved about this things.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/10/2018
This story is just ridiculously.
Guest chapter 15 . 6/2/2018
This started really well. Naruto being trained as an ANBU. Then he becomes a jerk who doesnt give a fuck who thinks he is smarter than everyone and beyond fault. I hated seeing naruto like that. There was no reason for it and it threw away the premise of the story.
GatorLHA2 chapter 17 . 5/26/2018
Thank you
Jenny chapter 17 . 5/5/2018
This was a really good story! I love the old timers and how Naruto could have been stronger if he was just trained properly! I was sad when Shin died :( I also liked when Naruto and Sakura beat up Saskue, verbally and physically lol. I liked Shino and Hinata in this too. The gifts were cool! Also, it was really thoughtful of you to outline the End when you couldn't finish it. Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed it.
Bearmauls chapter 17 . 4/6/2018
Too bad this is discontinued, I was really enjoying it, and it went in directions I didn't expect. You might want to put 'discontinued' in the description, otherwise it's a bit of a shock to read what you think is a completed story, only to discover that it's not, really.
Rosenkruz chapter 8 . 3/24/2018
Ok, I fucking loved the TF2 Meet the Sniper reference
Rivael chapter 1 . 3/13/2018
Ok, so, I haven't started reading yet but I just wanna say that when I read your title the only think I can think of is:
"Fool, if I had taught him the _new_ way, he might have stood a chance."
Am I the only one here who watched Dragon Ball Z Abridged?
Guest chapter 15 . 2/24/2018
Ninja did fight alone and ninja did also die alone
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