Reviews for Old School
ZaeTheWonder chapter 15 . 6/19
well that was unexpected
Zeke Hooper chapter 17 . 4/7
was a good story.
Zeke Hooper chapter 1 . 4/7
good start to the story.
Guest chapter 6 . 2/26
I really like your story but my god is he a dumb ass still why would in the world would he tell enemy combatant his entire life story what possible reason is there to do such a thing he supposed to be a better ninja. It is frustrating when he tells his allies things but when he goes around and spout stuff off to foreign Chenobi‘s it’s just so goddamn dumb.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/26
Dammit I was hoping he was gonna kill of Sakura I hate that bitch I get annoyed when she gets help
Detsella Morningdew chapter 1 . 12/31/2021
This definitely an interesting "Naruto gets a decent teacher early" start. I particularly like the tiger stripes thing instead of the stereotypical black. Makes things a bit more unique. (And requires less convincing for Naruto to accept it.)
Aedwards179 chapter 1 . 12/15/2021
what the hell is a magic sky sword they keep mentioning
Dracom Blade chapter 17 . 7/11/2020
sorry to see this go unfinished i liked your writing style and this was a damn good story. take it easy hope to see more from you.
Jestersky98 chapter 13 . 3/10/2020
Honestly the shittiest chunin exam ever written
So bad that I won’t bother reading the rest of the story
Chrisfragger chapter 13 . 7/22/2019
This is fucking stupid... Why not just say that Gaara attacked him? Is he not meant to defend himself? For fucks sake...
Dzarsos chapter 2 . 5/16/2019
Jesus shit... punctuation, my dude. Punctuation. This is a pretty interesting story and reasonably well written, but every sentence is a run-on, and it's like you've never heard of the comma... I can't follow your dialogue, because it's all once solid flow.

For example, just looking up from this box: "To be honest he was but that's not to say that you can't get better but you're going to have to work hard and overcome your obsession with Sasuke he needs a friend more than anything."

It ought to read something like: "To be honest, he was, but that's not to say that you can't get better - but you're going to have to work hard... and overcome your obsession with Sasuke. He needs a friend more than anything."
Monster King chapter 17 . 4/7/2019
Great job
SinfulPride chapter 1 . 7/14/2018
Awesome premise and not bad language but everything kind of just runs on into each other. Makes it feel like everything is happening at the same time which just isnt believable. Too much too fast is not good.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/11/2018
This Naruto is worse than the one in the anime. If he was train by the old school, how come he is announcing his skill and strength to everyone he meets. Shouldnt he be more reserved about this things.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/10/2018
This story is just ridiculously.
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