This started really well. Naruto being trained as an ANBU. Then he becomes a jerk who doesnt give a fuck who thinks he is smarter than everyone and beyond fault. I hated seeing naruto like that. There was no reason for it and it threw away the premise of the story.

Thank you

This was a really good story! I love the old timers and how Naruto could have been stronger if he was just trained properly! I was sad when Shin died :( I also liked when Naruto and Sakura beat up Saskue, verbally and physically lol. I liked Shino and Hinata in this too. The gifts were cool! Also, it was really thoughtful of you to outline the End when you couldn't finish it. Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed it.

Too bad this is discontinued, I was really enjoying it, and it went in directions I didn't expect. You might want to put 'discontinued' in the description, otherwise it's a bit of a shock to read what you think is a completed story, only to discover that it's not, really.

Ok, I fucking loved the TF2 Meet the Sniper reference

Ok, so, I haven't started reading yet but I just wanna say that when I read your title the only think I can think of is:
"Fool, if I had taught him the _new_ way, he might have stood a chance."
Am I the only one here who watched Dragon Ball Z Abridged?

Ninja did fight alone and ninja did also die alone

Thought the Sand Sibs were sent home after the first part of the exam.

Well damn, let down that the story ended, but it really was some fantastic stuff. Not enough writers choose to do a take on Naruto with a more militaristic mindset which is surprising but too true. Thanks for creating your own world in the story, and thank you for writing!

I am sorry you have decided to not come back but i did want to thank you for the outline. The closure is nice and is appreciated.

Wow, the crappy punctuation makes this story almost unreadable.

As much as I dislike the fic being left unfinished. I am glad that atleast a few author's give us the reader an ending. Even a short summary is better than being left completely unfinished.

Enjoyed your fic thank you for sharing.

A$$hole move... Put the word abandoned in the description, if you're gonna pull that crap.

I really enjoy the story. But I really didn't like the last chapter. I hope one day you'd pick this story back up and finish it.

damn i just found this like 4 days ago and to find out it got cancelled. right through the heart man