first off FUCK YOU for saying no to Hinata she's the ONLY girl aside from TenTen in Konoha that works for Naruto and as much as I like Temari I just don't see that working so just don't give Naruto a pairing. Now on to what I was going to say before I read your little note at the end saying no to Hinata which honestly is stupid. I'm wondering exactly what you mean by good and bad about Naruto's heritage and how Minato had something to do with this that was bad aside from sealing Kurama. Did Minato somehow agree to doing something to Uzu despite his wife being from there or what the hell

only one small problem in this story an that's your timeline as the Second Hokage died in the FIRST war and while I can't say for sure I'd be willing to be that Bunpaku (I believe that was the monks name) died before the second war as well

While I'm a bit disappointed this story won't be continued at least you had the decency to give us a basic rundown of how it would've ended. I hope you change your mind someday (Even if it meant rewriting from scratch) and finish it right and maybe right that sequel you mentioned. Thank you for a good story and I hope life treats you well. Have a good day.

Shit.

Hah, Ino earns it, and choji goes berserker. Dig it!

Shino mvp again.

Oh fuck you old man.

Poor widdle sasuke, how the fuck did you make me feel bad for him?

Jiraya is gonna shit.

Funerals suck, wakes rule, and I would kill to have a note like that from my dad. Asthma attack caught him while sleeping. Bad combo.

So much fun and so much not fun, it's crazy. Love Homura tapdancing like a fucking champ, while fully knowing that is ninja wire at his throat. Koharu being a dismissive shit is also fitting.

Also fkin love the tenten/naruto nomance. I've seen fics where ayame becomes the therapist for konoha, I pity poor tenten if she becomes naruto's confession booth. "... with fishsticks" "what in the unholy fuck is wrong with you?" "A lot."

Oh you had some fun with trap-chan.

I once read an extremely disturbing fic in which team 7 is sent to a milk farm... with no cows.

And they say tsunade worked there, and started out like sakura.

And I had managed to supress that memory, until you brought up danzo's alternative nutrition plan.

But didn't that emo bastard nietzsche say that the best art wounds us?

And then he wanted his blog burned posthumously, like a little bitch.

I can dig it!

Holy shit, the "check this shit out" scene is cinematic as fuck. I mean live action anime adaptations are garbage, but I'm imagining a squad of greybeards who are the best of the best of the best, sir!

So awesome! And you dropped a deuce on the proud sensei trope! Awesome!