Mvp shino, dang.

Kinda a good story, though I wish you would tag abandoned on the summary. I really only search for completed fics because some people can't finish or only update every few months and I want to read the whole story and not waste time with something that I'll never know how all the pieces come together. It really makes me mad when people put a story as complete when it is NOT complete and pretty much waste my time.
Thank you though for at least admitting you lost your muse and giving us an idea for how it would all end.
Though I'd say Naruto got a raw deal with his last two precious people dying, and the veneer of a precious person being severely hurt. If the third could so causally give him a voluntary mission and not say that it should be done on the down low or not all when that is how he wanted it then he was just using naruto as a patsy. I've really seen hiruzen as a dumbledore character in Naruto. The 'Light Lord' that is just as bad as a 'dark lord'. C S Lewis quote fits dumbles and hiruzen to a T - “Of all tyrannies, a tyranny sincerely exercised for the good of its victims may be the most oppressive. It would be better to live under robber barons than under omnipotent moral busybodies. The robber baron's cruelty may sometimes sleep, his cupidity may at some point be satiated; but those who torment us for our own good will torment us without end for they do so with the approval of their own conscience.”

oh this chapter is bullshit trash bitch work on your story ideas.

Decent story but this better not be a hinata fanboy pair which would make this complete trash

O god i only read 2 chapters but i already dislike this fic because you made it into a naruto hinata pairing the most over used thing i have ever seen on here why do people like that pairing so much naruto has shown more attention to other women then hinata not including sakura

I'm so sorry for that i felled asleep not becuase of your story but because I worked 10hrs straight but i really enjoyed tgis first chapter.

BM. . . . m . .. m . M. n MB. . No.. MB. . m . .. .8 m. noon .n..i . m. .m

thanks for the closure. I reread everything anyway and it was a great ride.

I really dislike you now, I reread all the story excited for the new chapter. Bah humbug.

Well at least I know that it's a dead fic.

Was socked to see an update, but expected it's contents. Anyways thanks for a fantastic story with an unique take on the ninja world. And also for confirming that it wouldn't be updated rather than keeping it hanging.
Though Hope you do continue writing.
Enjoy.

thanks for ending it, i'm sad but i respect your decision.

Thanks for actually ending it... that's not a common thing :)

Too bad about the story not continuing but your story your choice and I'd rather have this conclusion letting us know what happens than you continuing when you don't want to.

Will keep following the story just so I can find it again and read it later.

Hey, thank you for the closure & for sharing everything you have from this universe! I really appreciate your hard work. I hope whatever you're working on now is going well for you! :)