Reviews for Hermione Granger's Quidditch Journal
Kai chapter 2 . 9/11/2014
There are five guys in Harry's year in Gryffindor. Even if Harry's a bit on the slow side, he should've known them after six years, and should know that neither Longbottom, nor Thomas, nor Finnegan are named Specter (Harry himself and Ronald I leave out here). Hell, he shares a dormitory and a shower with them.

Oh, and Harry of all people calls Hermione "short". He who is tiny. (Malnutrition in their early years tends to do that to a person) And he calls her "quite light for a boy", scrawny waif that he's himself...
Kai chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
Harry calling Hermione "Herms", yeah, right.
And Hermione not exploding then, indeed.
And Ronald forgoing the chance to fill his stomach with sweets on Harry's account.

Even more seriously OOC than Hermione playing quidditch.
pinkpetal34 chapter 7 . 3/25/2014
hermione and harry were PMSing a lot.
mychakk chapter 7 . 10/26/2013
nice, I loved the ending, because I've been just craving a HHr story with Hermione being a quidditch player - and voila here is one :D Thank you :)
Mattias chapter 7 . 9/11/2012
Hmm how could Hermione actually accept Phineas as a real boyfriend from the start? I mean he frigging blackmailed her... No matter how far he would get with her, that is RAPE... S Same shit as if he had used lovepotions... What annoys me the most is that you let Phineas walk away in the story unharmed after all he did, Harry should have beat the shit out of him, and he should have been exposed as the slime he was...

Guest chapter 5 . 9/11/2012
Umm sorry but this story doesn't make any sense, unless Hermione has been memorycharmed... Harry and her kissing, that should give a pretty damn large clue, (like an elephant), as to why Harry is jealous... You don't kiss friends in that way, so it is quite obvious Harry wanted her as his girlfriend...

rk16 chapter 7 . 8/10/2012
really loved the nice
uwishuwerecool chapter 7 . 2/4/2012
omgahitsbritt08 chapter 7 . 11/22/2010
OMG! So they get married at the end! SQUEALS!
SorrisoD'amore chapter 7 . 7/3/2010
i loved the story it was kind of like she's the man! i loved it so funny! i hope you keep writing in the future!
Bekah94 chapter 2 . 12/27/2009
He knows doesn't he!
Dark Neko 4000 chapter 7 . 9/4/2009
wat going to happen next
Firestar-Merlin chapter 7 . 7/11/2009
Hilarious although I always thought of hermione as a Chaser.
Twitz chapter 7 . 5/31/2009
Awesome story. It's really funny too. :)
finalfantasyfan13 chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
I love this story, the plot is really good, and I love the competitive nature of Hermione. I like the relationship with Harry and Hermione too. It's such a good story.
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