Reviews for Finding the Gravel Road
gr8read chapter 2 . 9/30/2009
Really enjoyed this story.

Thank you for sharing your time and talent.
kalina-blue chapter 2 . 3/16/2009
I'm so glad Sam came back for Dean.

Great characterisation of brothers.
hopeAndDreams chapter 2 . 3/11/2009
Awesome job! I am so glad that you decided to write the tag to the episode. I love the way you handled the boy's interactions...the way Dean let Sam go and how Sam responded by returning cause of his concern for Dean's safety :) I really hope that Kripke finds a way soon to resolve the issues between the boys as well, cause I can't stand the growing distance between them anymore.

But at least now I have this tag to think about, and believe that the boys will be ok. Nicely done!
casammy.armoasantander019gmai chapter 2 . 3/9/2009
creo que su historia no está lejos de las ideas de kripke, al menos eso parece con los videos promo q he visto, los bro siguen juntos y parece que no lo hacen tan mal y dean no está renunciando a salvar a su baby bro, dean no va dejar a sam y sammy no va salir de dean, de hecho con sam no existe ningún problema de perdonar o no a dean x q sam siempre tiene el sentimiento de culpabilidad encima y dean después de todo sammy es su mundo, su vida y no va renunciar a su baby bro, dean es capaz de perdonar todo lo que haga sam, siempre, y va estar a su lado aunque vaya al darkside y no va permitir q ángeles ni demonios lleguen a sam lo que sí me gustaría sería que dean de una vez x todas se haga cargo de ruby y la envie de vuelta al infierno estaré pendiente de su proxima historia, see later
Ster1 chapter 2 . 3/9/2009
Oh, very nicely done! I honestly haven't come across too many hurt!Dean, apologetic!Sam fics so I was so happy to read your version. Thanks for posting..
sweet-destiny3 chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
I thoroughly enjoyed this story more than the others. Very accurately detailed accounts about their hunt. Humor in the frisky comment from Dean and the town named Hell. I thought when he was in the hospital and sleeping, he should've talked to Castielle. That would've been interesting. I don't think Sam should've said dude when he found him in the hole or rubbed his knuckles. He should just pat his knuckles. The communication between the brothers and the dialogue was realistic and in character completely. I would have like more thoughts from Sam at the end than actions.

The grammar part of the story was awesome as usual. You have really improved at your writing...I mean to keep people intrigued and have a highlight to the story. I like the case they took and I like the fact that Sam jumped in about Lilith and you considered all types of possibilities of the outcome of chasing her. Since the town was called hell, you should have done a mild flashback from Dean of hell and Sam of exercising a demon. I loved the rental car part and the fact that Sam felt free to go because Dean let him but expected Sam to stay anyways. WONDERFUL. I enjoyed it.
nochickflickmoments chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
hey, i already read so much tags for sex&violence, so i wasn't sure when i saw this story - but i think you nailed it. the tone of the story is very much alike to the series, your dean and sam so in character, no melodramatic overload. i really love your outline, hope you update soon!
lilballerette10 chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
casammy.armoasantander019gmai chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
me disculpa pink pero dean jamás dejaría ir sólo a sam a ningún lado x más enojado q esté, dean mejor q nadie sabe que las veces q se separaron terminó todo muy mal y generalmente es sammy quien termina lastimado, y pero aún estando ruby de por medio, creo que dean ya se la tiene jurada contra ruby y es cuestión de tiempo q él pueda hacer ver a sammy que ella realmente le está manipulando y tiene otros intereses para hacer que sam use sus poderes y mate a lilith, al menos mi opinión es que si bien dean dejó a sam ir x ahora creo que irá tras él lo más rápido posible y eso sería bueno después de todo juntos son más fuertes y al final creo q la intención de los demonio y de ruby misma es mantener separados a los bro, x q sin dean sam es más fácil de influenciar, ok estoy ansiosa x ver la continuación de su historia y please vuelva a juntar a los boys, tal vez castiel podría intervenir para hacer ver a dean q no debe dejar sólo a sam y terminar de una vez x todas con la perra de ruby y enviarla para siempre al infierno
hitchcock-starlet chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Wow. Your attention to real-like emotion is amazing. I can totally picture something like this happening in the series, except they tend to like to write Dean on a more angry-side of emotion when things get like this... anyway, I loved this first part. I can't wait to see what comes next! Please update soon.
angeleyenc chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
plz update! poor dean! Sammy needs to turn back!
Vanessa Sgroi chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Oh, man, this just broke my heart. That episode still haunts me.