|Reviews for A Bloody Kiss|
| bakura chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
please make more chapters plz.i REALLY want more jack shit
| Tsukune chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
Put more chapters like 20.
| Redstorm254 chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
Dude. This was a good one-shot. I want to know why in the jack-shit moka was freakin bleeding please write more chapters.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
Omg. I love it. I can't wait for more, please add more to it, I love it so much
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Good for a first. Simple. Lemony. But little detailed and extremely short. Once again have I found yet another author whom has not exceeded my expectations and, like always, Disappointed me greatly.
At least... Watch the language. Remember this CHAINSAW MONKEY, Remember this.
(now...soon to be author)
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
It was a really good story you should write another chapter about it please.
| Gamera68 chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
Pretty good, but could uses some more "Lemony Lemontastic Lemons of Lemoniness"
If you would like some pointers on how to write more Lemony goodness, there are a lot out more hardcore Lemons out there (as in here on FF) that could help you to get more into the character's heads.
Like I said, it's not bad for your first Lemon and my first one was not much better intil I went back a rewrote the lemony parts. Could use more descriptions, but not bad for a first time :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
You should keep going it a good story
| anonymushneshnes chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
I have an account but i forgot the password so i put anonomous , and then some. anyway, please continue its a good story an it caught my interest. good job, so plz do right jack shit.
| Avatarlover1 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
That was sweet I liked it keep it going i want to know what happens!
| Alecx0001 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
Pls continue the story.
| ScarletTemptress chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
Please continue, this has some potential I think. Also a major potential for a sh*t load of lemony goodness. :)
| The Elemental King of Hell chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
PIZ wright more chapter!
| Des Morse Morde chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
Dude, it would be seriously appreciated if you wrote more, besides, it's hard to get people to review the first chapter of a story, let alone request more, so maybe you could consider taking this story up again seeing what sort of feedback you get? I hope so.
| guest123552358657764 chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
you have to write more chapters we need to know why she was bleeding