|Reviews for Malentendu|
| Nata-Arci chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
WOw poor Colin! Gotta suck to be the everyones lab rat and not being treated like a human being. Hopefully being saved by Tory is the wake up call he needed. For him to understand that he does matter to people. I hope this is enough for him to take the initiative and open the door for a relationship
Anyways, great job and I hope you continue soon!
| Cascade de Diamant chapter 2 . 6/10/2010
Good story, I like your vision of the Gaia project :)
I burst out laughing when Paul tolt to Tory that he was in love.. It was unespected ! And Tory's reaction is so cute :3
I can't wait for the next chapter ! x)
| Determined chapter 2 . 3/17/2009
The summary scared me at first (CAPS LOCK graah), but this is a pretty good read! :) It plays well with the characters' emotions for each other, and I like your ideas on the Gaia Project. Please continue! :D
(Btw, not to be a bother or anything, but in your user name 'yaoi' is spelled incorrectly)
| 6-The-Cloaked-Nocturne-9 chapter 2 . 3/16/2009
Awesome, I like it alot so far, but poor Colin, I'd have been angsting if I was in his position too. Argh, I hate doctors, they're all annoying in my opinion. I hope that Colin will be able to talk to Tory, since the doctor will probably be watching him, and I feel bad for him, I'd feel the same if it was my fault someone fell off a cliff. And Yay for Paul, pushing the domino train in the right direction, I look forward to more of thisw much love Cat
| julia chapter 2 . 3/14/2009
Funny and interesting. Keep it up!
| wonder1440 chapter 2 . 3/14/2009
Yeah, probably more like an embankment. Which, depending on your fall, could leave you with no injuries! :)
Great chapter! My heart was in my throat about Tory for a bit but then I saw he bounced back _
| yaoi4evandnevayuri chapter 2 . 3/13/2009
Yayz! They survived! lol You had me scared there, there was another author on here that killed Colin. I don't think I could read another sad story like that... Oh, and Paul is such a perv, he would definitly try to hit on Mandy if she was a little bit older, (by a couple of months! lol jk...)
I also did noticed that Colin never says or hears about Tory's first name. It's great that you included that. (It's weird isn't it..?) Anyways, thank you for continuing it! *Hugs in thanks* I wish I can give you flowers because that's how beautiful it was. Hope you continue, if not, then that's okay as well.
| egg10rru chapter 2 . 3/13/2009
Woo, plot development! One of these days I'll figure out how to write that stuff. And I love how Tory knows like practically everything there is to know about Colin, but Colin doesn't even know his real name xD
Even more than that, I totally expected Mandy to be the one to break it to Tory that he's in love with Colin because she's already gone through that insight, but I actually like it better coming from Paul. It makes it hilarious! In my story it sadly is only going to come from Mandy. Actually...wow Paul isn't even in my plot structure! Oh god now I have to go reconfigure it because Off*Beat would have no comic relief without the Dead*Beat xD
| Brometheus chapter 2 . 3/13/2009
yay! beta is happy with chapter
this is so cute makes me want to read it so much more! D:
| yaoi4evandnevayuri chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
Oh, wow! That was amazing! I don't even know how you COULD finish this. It sounds to me that Tory and Colin have met their end... *Which sucks...* But it was awesome either way. I hope you take more time off your other stories to finish this! I'll be sad if you don't. lol
| Vicky chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
| wonder1440 chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
The Colin POV is cool. Hurry with Part 2!
| julia chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
That was great! Though there was one part where you wrote "Colin" when you obviously meant "Tory." No big, just pointing it out. Anyway, awesome story. Please write more!
| egg10rru chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
O.O A cliffy that involves an actual cliff...I believe that counts as epic genius but it doesn't make me hate you any less for it. Hurry up and write the next chapter! *cries*
Your writing is utterly beautiful, btw. I wish I could write this well...
| Brometheus chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
BAM review number one!
-was really tempted to end there and be funny-
A-nyway I think this is cute and I cant wait to beta the next chapter