|Reviews for Special Store Room|
| kkut04 chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
your story is really nice :] but can i just say one thing? :-/? um...wen you write the moans like ehhn~~ the " ~ " kinda takes the mood out for me at least. Can i just suggest if you can use " ... " so it would be like ehhnn... but its only an opinion :D
| Sylentia Levin chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
wow. smex up the wall. nice
| Yueitchi chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Very good. I loved it.
Um, can you write one about Uruha and Aoi?
| Kaoru Sayuri Kamiya chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
Like it ! But i would have prefer a few chapters (so good !)'cause a oneshot is to short when the story is so hot !