Reviews for Crimson Dawn: Uzumaki Naruto
Guest chapter 9 . 6/6
What the fucking hell kind of ending is that! What the fuck
MisaMisaLawliet chapter 1 . 6/2
I'm sorry to be writing this but...this is the worst fucking fanfiction that I have seen in my , I said it!Hate me for my opinion but i just want you to know that when making stories like this one, you can't add OC's. The reason behind this is that when you add OC's/a OC to a story is that it ruins the adventure and excitement when the character learns and progresses the more you get into the story. And I am sorry thag I am writing hate but i must say that this has a great plot and would be better without the OC's.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/16
I love this book hahah
crusade chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
WHy the fuck, would joining anbu, take a fucking years time? that makes no sense at all, and the fact that you think they join the acedemy a year before they graduate is simply idiotic, they probably join when they are 8, or even earlier, as it used to be very normal to graduate at 10, but people like kakashi graduated at 5 so there really is no way the join the acedemy at 11.
narusaku dramione chapter 1 . 10/20/2016
So Sakura/Ino being "presidents" of Sasuke's fan club is wrong. And it's ok to bash them. But Hinata being the president of Naruto's fan girl club is ok. Yeah right. It's BS! Another bashing Sakura fic...What a surprise...
I want to write chapter 1 . 6/30/2016
I like what I'm reading so far. (Chapter 1)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
"Why didn't Naruto kill his aggressors, that I did not understand...

Besides he was being too kind...

Where is the superiority complex, where is the darkness that inevitably comes with intelligence, yet all you made is a cliche piece of humanist work -.-"
I agree I suppose I can tolerate Naruto being OP but the fact that he seems to have no weakness. I would have suspected something like Light from death note or Sasuke or Shikamaru with great intelligence comes superiority complex or a weakness such as laziness in the form of Naruto.
Tony McNucklz chapter 3 . 9/23/2015
I'm worried this is going to be another story where naruto becomes ANBU, who by DEFINITION and MANDATE are completely ananomous to all but a teammate or 2 due to the foxholl effect and the hokage; but characters who should never be aware of their connection to the organization for both sides' protection just happen to find out like its no big deal. I mean who cares if half the class and their families know. they won't tell right? let it slip? discuss it among themselves and be overheard?
Guest chapter 2 . 4/14/2015
Why the fuck do so many fics have naruto falling in love with a fuckin stalker i mean shes just weard iys always i love u hinata. Retarded
kate munoz chapter 9 . 6/19/2014
I thought you would make naruto and hinata be together I mean itd be better just saying no affence ive never heard of a fumina all through the naruto series but ok
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
Why didn't Naruto kill his aggressors, that I did not understand...

Besides he was being too kind...

Where is the superiority complex, where is the darkness that inevitably comes with intelligence, yet all you made is a cliche piece of humanist work -.-
J.C chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
Amazing, just plain and simple
Tunderkiwi chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
"awesome story" :) Joke aside, for first chapter it was good. Not epic but very well written. Ofcourse I cannot make a valid assuption by reading first chapter alone so i am gonna read the rest.
Narutoyung chapter 9 . 9/14/2013
Cant wait for naruto/sanae pairing
Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
damn. It looks like a good story but i hate OC's. well thats not really true, i can easily like/tolerate OCs but when they bend canon to such a degree it turns AU, its hard to tolerate. sorry but.. yeah. no go for me :/
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