Reviews for New Beginnings
animechick9000 chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
This story is awsome and cute! XD
BlackButterfly9 chapter 10 . 8/13/2010
its so funny! hahah! keep it up! 8)
JesusisLove chapter 5 . 7/14/2010
lol you're right I never thought that Xemnas was Riku's father. Wait 'till Roxas knows. haha
JesusisLove chapter 3 . 7/13/2010
loved it! can't wait to read more!
JesusisLove chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
It's just the beginning and I want to read more. I like the idea of you making the characters with the same characteristics as the KH series. You know good, happy and active people. what you should try to verify is the grammar. I noticed some in the story. Take the opportunity to read them carefully, maybe twice or thrice. But, however, the story was great. Hope you get some more inspiration
Kai Hero chapter 10 . 2/1/2010
Wow great chapter, I love this series, Cloud and Namine's relationship is so cute! Please update!
uchihacutie chapter 10 . 1/6/2010
ii luv thiis fiic so much. Her and Cloud make a cute liil friiendshiip, lol. But Roxas and the gang are way to protectiive, and one day Namine miight just snap...who knows? Ii thiink a wonderful ftory liike thiis deserves wayy more reviiews... o
The One that Hunts your Soul chapter 10 . 10/10/2009
hey hey nice chapter keep up the good work
LarkaSpirit chapter 10 . 10/9/2009
I loved this chapter! It was pretty funny!

Green isn't Riku's color...

HA!

Loved it!

-Larka
g-peachy-chan chapter 10 . 10/9/2009
Epic WIN! Love it :)
eL-ch4n chapter 7 . 10/7/2009
Oh boy.. Marluxia was such a jerk

Aw.. I hope Nami would realize soon that it was not one sided..

Anyway, luv it
eL-ch4n chapter 3 . 10/7/2009
Like it, luv it, hehe

Lol, I'm starting to read the next chappie,

Riku was so cool in this chapter

I wondered if he was strong enough
Doctor Pharma chapter 9 . 9/10/2009
Oh my God! This is one of the best stories I've EVER read on FF! I love Zack! He cracks me up! And when Demyx was shouting about the aliens I almost died of laughter! I'm glad you choose Marluxia as the main villan, he's my LEAST favorite KH character, Namine being my most fave! I love Riku and Namine together! Update soon!

~Rain Megami
Gaminggenius chapter 9 . 9/5/2009
Another awesome chapter! Plz update soon!
blitzburn chapter 9 . 8/2/2009
Wow this chapter was had everything a good chapter needed. It would be cool if Roxas found out about Namine and Riku's date in the next any case, great chapter can't wait for the the next one.
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