|Reviews for Enslavement|
| SketchPlan chapter 3 . 6/27
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/4
wtf? ...why is this chapter in this story... absolutely nothing similar in any way. completel for them. first/second person. in,writing style(r u retarded?) just completely ridiculous
| consistency chapter 10 . 4/4
.tenten wad orphan last chap.
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/19
| bigmac1 chapter 11 . 3/10
| my 2 guys chapter 11 . 3/3
that was good keep the chapters coming
| bubblebudy chapter 11 . 2/18
| Blazing Dragon of Apocalypse chapter 11 . 1/2
Don't do this style fanfiction of anime or manga should not be written in first Pov because it is not written like that usaully while other fanfiction like Percy Jackson or Harry Potter should be in First Pov.
| kyle chapter 11 . 9/26/2015
to be honest it was different it took time to get use to it and still I didn't really feel as much lust and powerful passion that the last 8 chapters had
| willow1996 chapter 3 . 9/26/2015
| DRAGON KING 142 chapter 10 . 7/17/2015
sweet story keep it up.
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/18/2015
Very very very good what next
| DeathPaladin chapter 7 . 2/16/2015
Been coming back to this for years and just now noticed a small error that completely changes the story.
"Their breathing stilled" should be "Their breathing SLOWED". Saying someone's breathing "stilled" is a way of saying they "took their final breath". The way that line reads, Naruto f***** the two of them to death. Just a minor mistake, but...
| strabimonx chapter 8 . 10/17/2014
| llat-2 chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
I wouldn't mind seeing that with Naruto getting the spanking from either Ino, Fuu, Hinata, Anko, Mei, Tsunade or Tayuya.