|Reviews for LoveLife Masquerade|
| ssyee123 chapter 5 . 4/19
Continue please and add a separate yanagi renji story
| sorceressmei chapter 6 . 4/19/2013
Love the story, superb! I really hope that you could write a sequel, showing the start of their compani0nship and eventually their love story.
| Bunnybot chapter 6 . 3/20/2013
Wow... what a beautiful story... this really caught my heart. I honestly love how you wrote this story, like how the POV doesnt change. And though this is a simple story it has a very definite plot. Good start good end. The (im not sure...) last chapter where you contribute the piano and lyrics are fantastic. The words have a very deep meaning and contribute well into the song; I could hear it in my head. The OC's as well as ryoki have a well deceloped character :D
My opinion on the ending.. hmmm, i think its good that this didnt turn out a fall in and and happily ever after! Love the words u used "cirlce of companions" it really ties back to the first chapter and shows a new starting point with hmryoki and keigo. One thing does bug me. The line that talks about "cliche romance" it really ruins the tone of the paragraph. It kindof came out of nowhere and when i read just that sentence alone, it seems more of you the authors commentary/opinion then the character ryoki. Try readint that specific parafraph and see what its like because it seriously jist comes oit of nowhere.
(Sory for spelling/ grammer mistakes I wrote this on my phone :P)
| Smash41KMF chapter 5 . 1/24/2011
| RubyHearts chapter 5 . 5/7/2010
loved it too...Amazing..Again i smiled through it!
| Cryptic Parchment chapter 5 . 9/15/2009
wah! I love it! please make a sequal about Ryoki and Atobe's love life! it's so swet! hehe lols sorry I just really liked that _
| Classicalitys chapter 5 . 6/30/2009
It was sweet
| CLasp.ToMe chapter 5 . 6/29/2009
Who would've thought Alarm Clocks could be so dangerous? That was a good story!
| sakuraxgaara2233 chapter 5 . 6/29/2009
| ansonozaki chapter 5 . 6/29/2009
nice chapter! LOL ..alarm clocks are really dangerous!
better watch out!
| Ukyou-Taisuke chapter 5 . 6/28/2009
YAY. YOU FINISHED. :D
HAPPY ENDING. :D YAY. XDD
I'm not gonna kill you, come on! XD Though the probability of my chucking an alarm clock at someone who tries to wake me up is very very high... XD (I've actually done it before.) XDD
ILY MICHY. 8D TIMES A SIDEWAYS 8. :D
| Classicalitys chapter 4 . 6/27/2009
Now I will go and steal the song.
Nahh. jks )
zomg u updated XD
I got lazy.
Heh. I don't even wanna update nemore..
And i just realized that I still need to do "my version of ur story" or smth.
Keh... and I still need to do a story together w/a frd...
Yes I know i'm ranting on and on :] but it's kuz i havent talked to u for so long
Oh.. i just realized that i haven't said nething bout da chappy..
It's really good :D
and i agree that it's a bit short, but that's ohkay )
cause the song makes up for it
| CLasp.ToMe chapter 4 . 6/25/2009
Omg, that's a beautiful and touching song. I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!
| ansonozaki chapter 4 . 6/19/2009
nice song update soon!
| xxxxihatepinkxxxx chapter 4 . 6/19/2009
OMGOSH. Great chapter. I am so INCREDIBLY HAPPY you updated this! You need to make a new chapter ASAP. BE INSPIRED. INSPIRATION IS ALWAYS AROUND YOU IN MANY DIFFERENT FORMS! NICE LYRICS! You obviously worked hard. Great job! Good luck with the next chapter! Big Fan of all your works! BIG FAN. Update the rest if ever you have time. I'm rooting for yah!