Reviews for Tenko no Renkinjutsushi
Raidentensho chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
very nice. im guessing the event naruto tries to forget is he attempted human transmutation to take form of his mother and something was taken in exchange for the knowledge of alchemy without transmutation circles. I cant wait till you write when naruto learns kage bushin's secret knowledge assimulation upon dispersing. you get the idea.
Kor-Phaeron chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
Good story, good start! Keep it up! I like it!
Uzukami chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
Kick ass can't wait to see what happens
The Warrior Within chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
and let the chaos begin :)
The High Demon Lord chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
The FMA manga is a lot better than the anime.

But good job on the story...
Grumpywinter chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
i wish you made this a crossover withthe FMA manga with naruto going there, that would have been so much cooler to see
darthgamer chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
Nice concept please update soon
crewger chan chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
am I the first one to review? awesome. KEEP IT UP PLEASE. it's been a while since I have seen a Naruto/FMA crossover. Are any FMA characters going to pop up?

Please don't make Naruto automatically SUPER HERO please and update!
VA23 chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
glad to see a fma/naru story that isn't a blatent retelling like you said. plot seems solid and i know lithius can take it and make it solid-er.

the only problem i had was it bled together to quickly. breaks such as lines or x's can make reading it much easier.

other than that one complaint, excellent work.
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