|Reviews for A World Apart|
| The Genius Mage chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
I read this, and actually didn't review. WTHWTF?
I liked it. _ For real.
| cortisoll chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Oh wow, this was neat. Haven't read any Rhyme fanfics yet, but I think you really have her character down pat. Way to go! Neat story.
| Nope I'm out chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
Hmm, I never really got how this pairing worked... but you pulled it off! Nice job!
| Alucard's Annoying Friend chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Aw that is so cute!
| SchwaWarrior chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
Good Lord, I read this story over a week ago and didn't leave a review... Totally forgot who the author was. Oh em eff gee.
Well helloes again Jamester. . I love this story. It and you have both been favorited. You kept them both in character real well (well more than "both", there were more than two characters in this oneshot, but you get my meaning), the concept is original, you **make it work** (huge importance factor when I judge fics), etcetera etcetera. :) I don't have a favorite part, all of it's good.
I do want to comment on Joshua: on the forums you said you made him a real jerk in this story... I really don't see it here. I think "jerk" wouldn't be the word to describe him. Again I just see him as sneaky and crafty here and taking any witty measure he can think of to reach his goal, which in this instance is Rhyme. Not a criticism or a praise, just an observation. ;P
Oh, also, 2.5 days for this? Awesome. You certainly have the aspect of "you can't rush art" mastered. Well done. :)
That about wraps up my comments for this piece. Excellent job. n_n
| Cshell614 chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
wow such a short story yet such a great plot. Heh... I got some work to do.
| Trouble.With.Words chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
Hey, this is my first review(cool!) I really liked ur story, i love Josh & Rhyme( even if they dont meet in the story) but i tink there da forgot couple of TWEWY and there's not enough stories of them out there,I liked the plot oo, i really ting dey cud or did meet like that, so fair play, keep up da gud work:) I'm new at dis site so its gud to see a decent story now n den:) xoxo
| Vixen's Shadow chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Kat: *Laughs* SWeet! So totally cute its harse
Vix: *stares at Katrina* What the hell are you talking about? Its not really sweet.
Crys: *laughs* No, silly Vixen! She's commenting on the fact its a JoshxRhyme. Which the two of us love! Its like...
Kat: a bolt from the blue with all the JoshxNeku around.
Vix: Slash? Wheres the slash, unless you ment to imply it elsewhere.
Kat: Don't whine, Vixen. Please just don't. I'll aready here enough of that tommorrow during school.
Crys: Before they attempt to rip each other apart I'll get them out of here. Keep Writing!
| katex chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
this is so cute!keep writing ok!x
| romeaddict chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
| His Living Doll chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
Oh my, that was..very cute~
I never really understood Joshua/Rhyme, it seemed a bit out there, but, I kinda like it now~
Very nice, and I hope your friend likes her gift
| Lost Legendaerie chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
-'Nyaahs' like a skitty- James, you're such a... a... GET OVER HERE! -glomps- Thank you! XD