|Reviews for The Queen BEING REWRITTEN|
| ObsidianEbony chapter 8 . 5/11/2009
Thanks for that bit with Gin. He's my favorite character. I love how you described his appearance: "...the figure wearing a fluttering white haori stepped towards them casually, his silver hair being tussled in the breeze and his ever present grin plastered across his face." Beautiful description.
Anyway...please update soon!
| ObsidianEbony chapter 7 . 4/27/2009
Wonderfully descriptive chapter. I also like how you wrote the entrance of Ichigo's friends and Yoruichi from Rayne's point of view. It kind of gives us readers a different look at some things.
Thanks for the quick update!
| Sesshylover978 chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
omg cant wait for the next one, lol I wanna kno what happens when they encounter Gin.
| ObsidianEbony chapter 6 . 4/25/2009
I liked the last bit with Arashiei talking to Rayne. I think it sets the mood really nicely.
Update soon please.
| Deenami-Nicole-Sciashi chapter 6 . 4/24/2009
lol can't wait for more
| ObsidianEbony chapter 5 . 4/4/2009
I found two spelling mistake's: "prequal" (I'm pretty sure it's spelled "prequel") and "dept" (I think you meant "debt"). The rest (esp. Ichigo's determination) was really descriptive and pretty well-written.
That said...please update soon!
| Deenami-Nicole-Sciashi chapter 5 . 4/4/2009
that was REALY good
| ObsidianEbony chapter 4 . 3/29/2009
"Houki Boshi" is one of my favorite songs. Thanks for putting it in your fic. I also like how you wrote Kon. He's my favorite comedic (is that a word?) character in Bleach. (besides Yachiru)
I'm not sure if this is intentional or not, but you switched between 'Reina' and 'Rayne' in the beginning.
| Deenami-Nicole-Sciashi chapter 3 . 3/21/2009
I can't wai till next chapter!
| the holy see chapter 3 . 3/20/2009
wassn't so fond of this chapter.
looking forward to seeing what you'll
do with the next.
| ObsidianEbony chapter 3 . 3/20/2009
I like how you wrote the conversation between Urahara and Rayne. Very smooth.
| karasu-umou chapter 2 . 3/16/2009
I really like this story.
It's really descriptive and exciting to read
besides, there isn't that many Shinji stories here,
so I'm glad you made one! :]
hope you update with more chapters soon!
| the holy see chapter 2 . 3/14/2009
I like it so far and I'm looking forward to reading what you come up with later.
don't be discouraged by the lack of reviews. It takes a while for a good story to be recognized :)
| ObsidianEbony chapter 2 . 3/11/2009
Very descriptive and I liked the fight scene. Quite frankly, I'm amazed this hasn't gotten more reviews. I think it's well-written and full of nice details.
| xXKaira-HimeXx chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
Awesome! Update soon!