|Reviews for Irrational Fears|
| krazieneko chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
This is so funny! I love it! I don't have a irrational fear of spiders but i'm not a huge fan of them either. The most hated things are roaches! Yuck! I love how Nate said she can do anything but to fear a tiny eight legged creepy crawly. Oh and let's not forget about nate's fear of squirrels. So cute and funny! Please write more of these naitlyn fluffies! Thanks for posting.
| Simi chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Cute! Works well as a stand alone. Could also be incorporated into a bigger story..you've got the premise nicely set up.
Dialogue feels a bit awkward - avoid repetition when you have a lot of conversation in a short piece.
Again, imagery was so vivid, it was like watching a video.
| CharliesConverse chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
I second that dislike D: Spiders creep me out and i love this story made me laugh :P
| isxbelv chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
i cant do moths. i love how nate is afraid of squirrels, and when he "told" her his fear of squirrels, she didn't make fun of nate. silly nate.
anyway, that was still really adorable!
| Killed in the crossfire chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
| Pancakes.On.A.Rainy.Day chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
hahaha,. love this one.. and the end is hilarious.. :))
| UnapologeticallyMe chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
This is really cute! Lol. It's funny because in my group of friends and sisters-I'm the spider killer. Hah. And how on earth can Nate be scared of squirrels? I love squirrels! We raised some abandoned baby squirrels at least three times and i loved it...now i'm rambling. See! Your story was just that good-good stories make me want to talk to the author! Lol.
| TheRightWrongs chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
honestly its 4 am where i am, so you'll be receiving a sucky review. sorry. the story is great and i thought it was cute. i'm not afraid of spiders but i do see where you come from. definately not irrational. my fear is of bees, i won't bore you with the why. the funniest part is where caitlyn blackmailed him to not tell anyone. and the squirel part cracked me up too. my friend has a pet squirel. ok i need sleep so ... bye!
| KlainePotter chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
loved the last line!
| bula ronnie rach chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
HAHA! Aw..that was too cute! Poor nate. afraid of squirrels! I love that great job, cant wait for more oneshots! :)
| Mini Alice Nelson chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Awesome, funny and completely fluffy. More, more, more.
| KariandTK chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
I'm totally the same way about spiders. I hate them with a passion. I think it started when I watched Arachnid or Arachnipohobia when I was little. *shudders*