|Reviews for Ordinary People|
| twilight121994 chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
i like the idea for this story,you should definatly keep going with it!
| fanficlover chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
eh?...well, that's weird...
but nice, i think.
| nanami chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
but it's beautiful, too! .
i kinda get the crazy but deep idea...
| Nezumii chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
I love the title and I love this story. Perfectly understandable and much better written than... certain books.
| Midnight Sleepyspray chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Okay, I get it. First, I do think the title is a bit random and doesn't represent the story very well. The fic sure is better than the summary (I'm not saying the fic's good). I kind of liked the way you made it simple yet maintained the mystery. I just hate fics with very deep words, trying hard to present mystery and power yet ending up making the readers dictionary wrecks. I would say that you could've made this better, though.
The idea's twisted, all right. It's like open marriage.