Reviews for The Bridge Of Death
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
This was a good one-shot.

I did find some grammatical mistakes. In the sentence, "Thinking it was all a joke you indulged him...", "you" should be replace with "he". Another grammatical mistake I caught was "embarasses", which needs to be replaced with "embarassed".

Otherwise, good work.

-Aria Breuer
ultima-owner chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
ROFL
Loquacious Lass chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
I quite enjoyed it, but please give me the pleasure of saying this.

Ahem. YOUR MOTHER WAS A HAMSTER, AND YOUR FATHER SMELT OF...EL-DERBERRIES!

haha no it rocked

-Rose
GluttonousAnorexiaNervosa chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Okay, so the Occasional David Bowie Stand-in was my favorite part. Mmhmm.
Ying-Fa-dono chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Nice. Doesn't Sarah realize she's all over Youtube already? I almost wanted Jareth to ask a retorical question and guy from scene 24 to fall off the bridge because he didn't know the answer. It's still okay that he didn't. Okay, now get some sleep!