Reviews for Perfection Is Faulty
HCookie chapter 1 . 5/19
This story was definitely... Interesting. The pairing certainly is, and I wish there were more stories out there with Mayuri/Szayel. Thanks!
no name chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
that was ...
hum.
this was ...
n..not bad...
. well kinda good...
i might keep it but only because its bleach
Devil'sEyeAlchemist13 chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Wow...just wow. That was AMAZING! As being a Szayel and Mayuri fangirl, I said Hoorah!
Aurelia Tepes chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Wow... I enjoy this couple and this is a scene I have never thought of...
lady3098209 chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
ZOMG. It was amazing. I must write for this pair. I decided how amazing it was by a picture. I can't believe your the only one to write for it ;~;
Killah kitteh chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
good,very good indeed this is a good pairing mayuriXszyel i like it keep up the good work
figliedellatempesta chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
Wow, yeah, horror was a good genre for that! But I liked it! I am a fan of both the 2 scientists, and the "research" angle is just too creepily awesome to pass up on. I'm sorta disappointed that he killed Szayel at the end, but I guess he couldn't keep him there forever and nor could he allow the rest of Soul Society to hear what methods he has been using to torture the octava.
Emochromatic chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
I've considered this pairing before, but never thought I'd read read it anywhere. It seemed to me too difficult a task for anyone to write well, and the pairing itself is rather intimidating material.

...You captured them so well. I'm amazed. I really enjoyed reading every word of this fic, and that is so rare. Most fanfics you see are semi-coherent fangirl pinings, but this one was thought out. I loved it. Despite Szayel's Resurreccion, I have never been able to imagine him as someone who engages in wanton sex. Mayuri came across exactly how he should; a sadistic bastard with a penchant for inflicting humiliating, spirit breaking torture. I say this, and yet I still love him as a character.

Two lines stood out to me in your fic.

"'Do not lie and insist that you have never done the same, filth.'"

Yes. I'd imagine Szayel doing the same if he had the chance. They both like breaking their victims.

"Sure, he had almost never been interested in sex back in Hueco Mundo. Las Noches, to be precise. But occasionally...in few, few moments...he would draw the fifth Espada into his lab, allow Jiruga to have his way and then leave. To stave off the urges that distracted him from his work so eagerly."

You've made me a very happy fangirl with this reference. I love pairing those two together, though when I write their pairing, its gangster romance. More broken bones than caresses, and they haven't even gotten to the smex yet, let alone kissed. Hmm... onesided love...

Anyways, kudos to you on your fic. Wouldn't have portrayed those two any other way. I absolutely loved it, and added it to my rather empty fave list. I should get cracking on that...
thegreatevilbakura chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
i loved it even the part where szayel died... sigh both mayuri and granz is sexy very good story
Lorelei Utahime chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
This story is fantastic.

I love how you wrote Szayel and Mayuri-your Mayuri is exactly how I envisioned him. I could see him laying with someone simply for the fact of humiliating them or breaking them (as I do not see him interested in sex in any other light). The sadism and the torture-and then the abrupt end, because he was tired of him-all spot on.

And Szayel's thoughts-I also see him not very interested in sex unless it's in a utilitarian sense. This would bother him more than a lot of things-mostly because he is not in control-which you played up very well. I could see being reduced to this something that the arrancar would be deeply troubled by; if not just for the fact that it reduces their pride to nothing.

Very, very well done. I really hope you'll write Mayuri again. It's very hard to find someone that writes him well.
zztop chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
love it!1
Doctor Reaper chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
scary but good! also, i love you'r profile picture! very funny!
ThierryMyst chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Ugh! I can't stand Mayuri...he creeps me the f*ck out! I've always wondered about his past, what exactly made him the way he was. And why the hell did Urahara have an interest in him, totally makes you wonder about Kisuke.
Redblade chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
Oh... my...

This... I can't call it perfection(that'd be blasphemy) but... wow. Poor Szayel... Wow...

...love it.
xerxesdiva902 chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
wow... that is all i can say about this. you captured mayuri at his worst. poor szayel.
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