|Reviews for 2nd Condition::|
| bunny1234 chapter 3 . 18h
Please update this i need to know what happens next
| SilvaBells chapter 3 . 3/4/2011
| Angel of Death and Darkness chapter 3 . 11/24/2009
I wonder if the Titans survived the blast or not!
I also wonder how Robin will feel after this?
I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
| shadow halfbreed chapter 3 . 7/31/2009
oh man...this is so sad...*whimpers*
and yet so well written! The emotions really strike the heart!
uh oh...I think I've read too many sad fanfics in one night...I better get to bed before I start crying again...
| Arashi-Kumo chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
...This is so twisted. I love it!
| Dstar504 chapter 3 . 3/21/2009
This has gotten a lot better since the beginning I cannot wait to read more.
| Yookami chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
This is a pretty good story. A bit story but I really like it. Makes me wanna real more. v
| Wynja chapter 3 . 3/14/2009
I found this through SLadinforever's latest chapter of "Remember, Robin, Its Never Too Late", and it's great! I love the dark stuff... hope it will continue?
| Sladin5Ever chapter 3 . 3/12/2009
*content sigh* I love Sadistic!Slade so much ;) He pwns all XD Watch out Bman, you're more than likely next :evillaugh: *cough* Your friend is a good writer Tell her to keep up the excellent work
| Sladin5Ever chapter 2 . 3/8/2009
I give you an 8 out of 10 You did a wonderful job. You should take a look at other Sladin fics too for more inspiration by these authors: Wynja, Jordancatgirl (aka alonein-darkness7), Dstar504, The Villain's Vindication, and myself. Keep up the great work and I look forward to chapter 3
| Sladin5Ever chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
This is a good start. I too have been writing Sladin for a few years (and teen titans for that matter). I just have a few things that I would like to point out (This is constructive criticism, I promise).
1) The places with all the "HE"s and "HIS"s, they should not be all caps like that. What you would do is italicize them in lowercase letters only; no caps unless at start of sentence like so "He is..."
2) A lot of people have made this tiny mistake; Beastboy is two words; Beast Boy
3) And the last thing is how you killed Starfire. A single bullet would not kill her that easily. Remember in episode Betrayal when Terra throws that giant boulder at Starfire? The most it did was knock her out. Another example is in Apprentice 2 when the nanoprobes were attacking the Titans. Robin hit her with the laser and it only knocked her out for a short time; a hot laser is a lot worse than a bullet. Several bullets or stabbing her repeatedly would be the best method.
You don't have to change anything unless you want to; its not my fic. But you might get more response if you take these hints into consideration. Again, I only give you constructive criticism (Do not mistake with flames; I too have gotten those and they suck).
I will also read the next chapter and rate the hot Sladin sex XD Keep up the great work
| robinthethird chapter 2 . 3/8/2009
OMFG! *SQUE* Holy fucking crap! I love it! You wrote that so well! Captured Slade perfectly! OMG I love you! Now do you want me to write the next part or what?
Oh, by the way, nice comments on the first chapter. lol. My sex sences really do suck. lol.