Reviews for Billow
Jessie Deal chapter 24 . 6/24
This was a cute story but it shows that it is your first. A couple of others of yours I have read (semantics, dismantle the sun and even tempest) show how you've become a better writer since.
but this was still a fun read
wine witch chapter 24 . 4/16
Thank you for this wonderful, sweet and amusing story.
Lisanna14 chapter 24 . 3/28
That was brilliant! :D
Guest chapter 24 . 3/13
Love your story!
katerztaterz chapter 24 . 3/7
Absolutely wonderful. I loved reading this story! And well done for a non-English speaker!
Guest chapter 24 . 2/29
You are a great non-native-speaker.
Thank you for your stories.
:-)
Guest chapter 3 . 2/16
ok. ok. I didnt want to, but you peck me.
You-Never-Leave-A-House-With-A-Fire-Burning!
Guest chapter 24 . 11/27/2015
Thank you for writitng this story.
Greetings, m.
Guest chapter 15 . 11/27/2015
I think its illegal to do such a thing.
Whats more, it is evil.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/26/2015
I still wonder how to translate "Hello, dear!"
Maybe "Hallo, hier drĂ¼ben!" or "Verzeihung, junge Dame!"
cant figure it out, sorry.
One couldnt call a stranger "Hallo, Liebes!" that does not work.
Greetings, m.
Guest chapter 12 . 11/26/2015
"Hag" needs to be translated somehow different.
Its something like "old hag", i do not remember properly.
Shell manage that easily.
Greetings, m.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/26/2015
That prediction needs more care in translation.
It should be more mysterious.
The reader should not understand it at once.
No offence ever at all,
m.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/26/2015
I mean, Prof. Snape would not call McGonagall "Weib" (or "Frau") right into her face.
Maybe if they were married.
Greetings, m.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/26/2015
"Woman" is a slur, but "Weib" or even "Frau" in this place is a even worse slur.
Still, I dont know how to translate it.
Maybe just leave it away.
Greetings, m.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/26/2015
I thougt she were about 22 or something and asked for rewievs to have some fun,
but in fact knew herself that she is a really competent translator.
Are you sure that she is only 15?

Me reading your story, to find out how it will end
and not waiting for the translation
actually should give you a hint,
yes. Like it.
m.
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